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Reviews for In the swirl of passion

By : Lywhn
  • From ANON - jenniferr68 on June 26, 2005
    Wonderful, I can not wait to read the rest of the story.
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  • From ANON - Claudia on June 19, 2005
    I love your story!!! Thanks a lot for the new chapter, I read it immediately: please write more!!! :)
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  • From ANON - lilly on June 18, 2005
    Another Great chapter. Would you think me a fruit to say I had tears in my eyes at the last part? Please continue and update soon.
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  • From ANON - szara on June 09, 2005
    Ich finde die Story echt toll, aber die Grammatikfehler sind sehr nervig. Was überaschend ist, da dein Vokabular ziemlich umfangreich ist. Warum schreibst du nicht auf Deusch? Ich weiß ja, dass sich manche Sachen komisch in der eigenen Sprache lesen (oder schreiben), wenn man viele englische fics gelesen hat. Ich kann recht gut Englisch, fahre aber am Samstag eine Woche nach Schottland und komme dort wahrscheinlich nicht ins Internet. Wenn du noch keinen Betaleser gefunden hast, würde ich dir gerne bei deiner Geschichte helfen.

    Tschüss
    Szara
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  • From ANON - mary on June 08, 2005
    This is good! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - lilly on June 08, 2005
    This chapter was so sweet and funny. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - AngelBabie4132 on June 03, 2005
    i LOVE ur story and i hope u continue...what is ur native language by the way?
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  • From ANON - jenniferr68 on June 03, 2005
    Your story is wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing your talent, we look forward to reading the completed story.
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  • From ANON - ljasell on June 02, 2005
    Even good stories are painful to read when the grammar is bad. Please find a beta.
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  • From ANON - lilly on June 02, 2005
    Another Awesome chapter. gods, I love this story. Please continue and update soon.
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  • From ANON - lilly on May 24, 2005
    You have done it again. I love the chapter and the story. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Kylie on May 19, 2005
    I think that this is a very well written story. There is a perfect blend of plot and smut, and I am glad that Hook didn't just rape her and she didn't just give in. I like how you ended the first chapter with her escaping the Jolly Roger. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - mary on May 14, 2005
    This is really good! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Enelya on May 14, 2005
    PLEASE! Continue this fic or I swear I will die! iPor favor! s'il vous plaît! per favore! пожалуйста! PLEEEAAASE!!!
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  • From ANON - lilly on May 13, 2005
    another awesome chapter. please continue
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