Click Here!

Reviews for The Silent Wish

By : LaurieBaker
  • From ANON - Vadne on May 29, 2005
    Oh, my. That was absolutly....AWSOME! When are you going to update next? I mean I would love to throw out some ideas for you like maybe a bondage scene....Acctually I was expecting that in the first chapter when he had abducted Aurora. And acctually yes, that is a very pretty name. It is the name of the Roman goddess for the dawn. Which is quite appropriate because he is a man that lives in everlasting night.....and then comes Aurora....his dawn. :) Hows that for appropriate. But anyhoos, you could try reading the Kama Sutra......or getting one of the Sutra's that have pictures of the positions. It would be nifty to see them experementing with the other positions....Especially since in the 1880's and the like the only known position that was used for sex was the Missionary (how dreadfully boreing) and they hadnt even ever HEARD of oral sex, in that time full of prudish Catholics it was concidered a sin to have sex in any position OTHER than the Missionary. That is western thinking for you. *rolls eyes* God bless the Kama Sutra! *yay!* heh heh heh.....there you go....have Erik find a copy of the Kama Sutra in Nadir's home and stealing it away to read it. *grin* (I just hope that he can interpret all the metaphores the it uses.)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jula on May 29, 2005
    Yeh somw of your euphemisms for sex and sexual organs are a tad cheesy and not in tune with the 19th Century. And I felt that the lubricant and the aphrodisian were kind of cheesy too.

    Other than that, I am SOOOOOOOO glad you decided to add to this story. It is a great story... so please continue!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Death on May 28, 2005
    That chapter rocked! lol! Update soon! I'm in love with this fanfic! It all ways leaves me whating more! ^___~
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ^^ on May 28, 2005
    aw man... that was so good.
    really, they are such a cute couple.
    even if the phantom was scary at times ^^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - LoveGuardian on May 27, 2005
    LOL Funny chapter. Why does that figure that Erik would do something like that? Update soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ljasell on May 27, 2005
    Good start, plausable plot. But please..love button? Love canal?
    It's really a stretch to imagine Victorian Eric spouting 70's slang.
    Otherwise, I look forward to reading how the happy couple manage to
    stay a couple and be accepted publicly.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Death on May 26, 2005
    Loved it! Update soon! This fanfic rocks! ^__^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Gevaisa on May 26, 2005
    Oooh! Continue!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Death on May 26, 2005
    Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_~ YAY! ERIK! lol
    Report Review

  • From ANON - LoveGuardian on May 26, 2005
    Oh, Aurora, you don't know what you're getting into... good choice! That was a fun chapter. The next on should be fun as well. LOL
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Provocateur on May 26, 2005
    I'm so glad that you have decided to add to this story. It's so dark and erotic, but beautifully written. Sometimes there is nothing better than a well-written, well-thought out story about lust and desire and the uninhibited world of sexual pleasure. Great work, I eagerly await your next update!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - xiaojiang on May 26, 2005
    wonderful! i love it! please continue!!!!!!!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jula on May 26, 2005
    Oh my Lord You have GOT TO CONTINUE THIS!!! I mean, I was all intent on it being short and sweet (or short and smutty), but now, with yoyr last few senteneces, I am thoroughly enthralled!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!! That was incredible! I really wasn't expecting that!!! So hurry up and add more, or no more Erik smutties for you!!!! Mwah hah hah!!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - omg on May 25, 2005
    omg
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Death on May 24, 2005
    Well I loved it! I hope you contuine with it! I think you have a wonderfull fanfic! Please update soon! ^_~
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!