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Reviews for Red Ombos

By : neffinesse
  • From ANON - Ligeia on June 18, 2011
    Hello again!

    There is an other point I don't understand. Seth at a moment says "Your father had special eyes, too, but I hear yours are fairer."
    What that story about the Osiris' eyes?
    I'm curious to know all the story :-D

    Bye

    Ligeia
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  • From ANON - Ligeia on June 18, 2011
    Hello!

    Thank you for this great great great OS! It was a pleasure and your Seth (sorry in French, we always use the greek names, so I fear you will have to stand them in this review^^) is just fantastic! Almost exactly like I imagine him since I'm seven: manipulator, seducing and fascinating because of his difference and proud of this difference who ruined a part of his life (the reject of his mother, the fear he inspires, the jealousy and hate for his brother who had everything
    Just great!
    Idem for your Horus, very young and unconfidant because Isis, or Thot, doesn't let him to prove by himself he is able to defeat Seth and to become a king.
    Just two things surprised me: First, the fact that he call Horus, "my king".
    And the fact that Horus practises equitation after the night he had: he is the uke for the first time: it is painful at that place! And if I remember well, Egyptians didn't practise equitation: they had charriots (and only since the Second Intermediar Period). So I would like you tell me were you found that information, because it is surprising to read that in a fiction where we feel in each word and characters' attitude that the author knows very well each variation of the myth, paid attention to the reactions of our heroes in the original text and based upon that to give them life, the time of a fiction.

    So well, that's all^^
    Thank you to have shared this story with us!
    And sorry for the mistakes.

    Have a nice day or evening.

    Ligeia
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  • From CodyMThomas on October 21, 2010
    This is one of my favorite myths from the Egyptian pantheon, and I'm glad someone finally pieced together a coherent scenario on how this played out. great job!
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  • From Alex on February 18, 2008
    Oh wow...simply the best story I think I have ever read on this site, or anywhere for that matter. No exaggeration either. I can only hope one day to be able to make words flow as you do, and to use such colorful descriptions. You truly have some talent here, and being my favorite myth of all time just made it that much better. Thanks for writing this and continue your work!

    ~Fly
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  • From BlackberryPatch on January 05, 2008
    Snerk. Ah, mythology... ;b A very entertaining read, thanks! =]
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  • From ANON - heroine_villain on July 16, 2006
    This was just...AMAZING!!! I thought I'm the only pervert in the world who has slash dreams about pharaohs and gods, but there we are! And the way you describe Egypt is just enchanting! Great job! Give us some more, cause it's the only one egyptian mythology based fic I've came across! Please?
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  • From ANON - Herald Soucree on December 15, 2005
    I was incredibly surprised that someone had actually written a fanfic for Horus and Set about that particular story. Not that I minded! I love Egyptian mythology, almsot as much as I love yaoi and slash, so to find the two mixed...I will be happy for days. I'm goign to add this to my favorites!

    Ironically, I myself am a self-dedicated priestess to Isis, but my boyfriend is very similar to Set, not Osiris. Bisexual, infertile, agressive, and dominating...(his favorite colors being black and red!). That, and one time he stuck his penis in a watermelon. Ever heard the myth that when Isis was running from Set who was trying to rape her, he ejaculated on the ground and there grew the first watermelons? There you have it.
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  • From ANON - Maid Kyli on November 08, 2005
    This was so well written, it makes me sad it had to end that way T.T Come on..can't they just live as gay lovers happily ever after T.T Still, I loved it. This was a really sexy story, not just smut, I liked it alot
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  • From ANON - Atocha on September 26, 2005
    HAHAHAHA!!!! POINT AND LAUGH!!! I was wondering where you got this myth from becuase i am a sick freak and would like to read it...
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  • From ANON - Erik\'s Siren on June 30, 2005
    Wow!!!! I really loved this story. There isn't much in the mythology section, and I have to say Egyptian is my favorite. And, Horus and Set are my two favorite gods!!!! Do you think you'll make another mythology story? I'd love to read it!
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  • From HonoNoKitsune on June 30, 2005
    Hey! Veeery nice job! I loooved the description of Set! And the description of everything else, too, to be honest. Though, I have a question as to where you recieved your information. I'm very interested, because I've never heard that Anpu's father was unknown; I've always read that Nebt-het (and there's another difference, too) decieved Auser and made love to him, therefore conceiving Anpu, and that he was adopted by Auset when she found out about it. If you'd like to tell me, just email me, or look on my profile and instant message me, which might work better because I rarely check my email... ^^;;
    I absolutely loved your writing style and the way the story flowed!! Please write another one like this!!!
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  • From ANON - FoxXx on June 17, 2005
    That's just awesome. Great take on the mythology, descriptive enough that the reader can see everything as it happens, and very well written besides. Great fic!!!
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