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By : BellaLaura
  • From ANON - Koda on July 19, 2005
    Yay for the Opera Ghost!
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on July 18, 2005
    I too had visited Paris on a school field trip. I too was the only one excited about visiting the Opera House. I saw the stairs with statues, and squealed out, Just like in the story!, and jumped up and down. I found old books behind wired walls. I went down into the basement or first floor, gawked at a fountain with no water in it. I wanted to explore the catacombs, so I searched for an entrance. I was in a court-yard of sorts, saw similar hall-ways leading to other similar court-yards. Choosing one path, I headed into it...and smacked several times into something solid, like an invisible wall...it took me forever to figure out that...
    and I jumped up and down and squealed with delight...
    I WAS IN THE INFAMOUS HALL OF MIRRORS!
    After, I sighed, and stared into one for several minutes, hoping to catch...
    a glimpse of the Phantom's ghost.
    Hehe...
    What can I say?
    I was sixteen, sexy, and since I was in the city of l'amour, I was hoping to meet my true love.
    I received little, wrong, or no attention at all.
    Two men turned out to be a nice gay couple...
    A weird man in a trench-coat pinched my legs...
    My group's guide scolded me for sneaking off to the Paris Opera House alone...
    A sea of snow-haired, star-skinned guys gawked at me as if I were from Venus...
    Your tale brought back some memories.
    I like your drama. It flows smoothly like a nice cup of coffee and a warm fire.
    Please do continue.
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  • From ANON - Koda on July 17, 2005
    Erik is so cool, is he not?
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  • From ANON - Koda on July 16, 2005
    Please, please stop writing part of it in italics. You can use something else to signify it's a different author. Like.. a line. Or a header at the beginning of the new section saying it's the new author. But a line would be better. Can you edit existing chapters on this site? I know you can on ff.net. Because I skipped over most of the italicized parts.
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  • From ANON - spikesbint on July 16, 2005
    Just read the new story, cant wait for more.

    Angela
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  • From ANON - Me! on July 16, 2005
    Hehehehehehe! How I love this fic! If people don't read it and love it....they're insane!!!

    ~*~Jade
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