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Reviews for A Thrill On The Tongue

By : hollilia
  • From EverMystique on January 30, 2011
    That was very hot. Nicely done, and with great imagination. Thank you for sharing.
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  • From nicholassanders on November 06, 2010
    This was beautifully written. Very strong, lusty imagery, and boy was it sexy! I have to admit, I love the more richly written smut as compared to the crudely worded, jack-rabbit style most people write (though I've written a few!) And don't feel alone, I'm female, and I've always written better M/M and F/F than F/M. In fact, some have asked me if I was male after reading some of my stuff, cause it was so good...( now if only I could bring myself to post some of my stuff!) Anyway! I loved it, and I look forward to more of your writing, I hope!
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  • From hollilia on August 22, 2006
    dfb
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  • From ANON - Jo on October 24, 2005
    That was great! Got an idea, what you could now is have Raoul go back to Christine or even have Erik go and fuck Christine anyway. That would be totally great! lol I sound like a complete perv now don't I? lol
    I think your witing style is really good and I think you descbed it all very well. Congrats on a great phic!

    Jo!
    ~x~
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  • From ANON - Claudia Delarose on September 11, 2005
    Wow... Finally some Erik/Raoul slash!

    Really enjoyed this..*fans self*VERY hot!
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  • From Siarra on August 30, 2005
    Oh my... You certainly made my day, I've been looking all over the place for some Phantom slash and much to my delight, not only found some but so wonderfully written as well. Never in a million years would I have guessed that this was your first time writing slash. Your writing style is a sheer pleasure to read with its poetic and thoroughly thought out lines and sentences. You absolutely seduce your readers, well, at least the ones with an appreciation for the English language.
    I'm not entirely sure if the second chapter has been cut in the middle, as sometimes happens on the site because the ending seemed slightly abrupt. While the story is lovely the way it is, I really hope that you'd continue it some day. It started out so thoroughly and it would be a pity for such a beginning to end with so little drama.
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on August 12, 2005
    1) Long before, I never ever thought to imagine Raoul and Erik...in this manner.
    2) Now...O_O...DAMN!
    3) =Heads to store to buy roses in every color=
    4) Is Christine ever gonna join them in a threesome?

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  • From ANON - Hauntingly on August 12, 2005
    Write more!
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  • From ANON - Shora on August 09, 2005
    HOLY..........you should contiinue this fic. it has WONDEFULL potential!
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  • From FlawOfFate on August 05, 2005
    Bondage. Mmmmmm. Good one, I love it!
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  • From ANON - BRP on August 01, 2005
    1) Eric is my #1 romantic hero.
    2) Both Eric and Raoul are handsome.
    3) I don't like seeing Eric and Raoul together.
    4) This story was...O_O...BLOODY AMAZING.
    5) Please, do continue.

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  • From ANON - K-chan on July 29, 2005
    >K-chan, I know your out there... REVIEW! Your my favorite!
    Thankyou sweet stuff!


    Erik: She's right, this is pretty tasteful for her.
    Meg: Well, there's my fantasy material for the rest of the year taken care of.
    Christine: *starry eyed* I'm in my happy place!
    Erik: By the way, where is Raoul?
    Meg: *points to corner* Over there.

    Raoul: *huddled in corner, rocking back and forth, eyes squeezed shut* Please make it stop, please make it stop, pleasepleaseplease make it stop...

    Christine: She broke him!
    Meg: You break it, you bought it.
    Christine: That's one way of getting rid of him...


    I'll save the rest for the actual MSTing. Yes, I am going to MST it. How could I not?
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  • From Onitsu on July 29, 2005
    Ok this was a very interesting fic. I normall dont like Slash but I found this one almost enjoyable to read. Hey can you review my story too? Ghosting through time? I know that this is pretty improper to say but I want the reviews. Please. (BTW, I loved the Outtakes VERY funny. I lauged my ass off really :) )

    Lets see the Meg's a whore one! We all know that she wanted to boink Erik. But seeing her do Christine, Roaoul. Jammes and god knows who would be interesting for those that wanted to pair her with one guy or another. *grin* Keep up the good stories!
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  • From ANON - Julia on July 28, 2005
    I usually don't like slash. This is one of the few exceptions, though. Great job!
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