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Reviews for Into the Factory

By : Mesopotamia
  • From ANON - Romska Noch on August 23, 2005
    Oooooohhhhh!! This third chapter got me oh...so...hot! I'd sure love to feel that hair brushing the inside of MY thighs. And, don't get me started on that luscious mouth...

    I'm salivating for more of this one!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2005
    "But then perhaps I would keep better track of things if I didn’t keep eating the planners...." That is SO Wonka!!

    Oh....!! Dang, why do I wish I was Laila??
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  • From ANON - Zasha on August 23, 2005
    Uhh! That's a bit scary! But I still love Mr. Wonka. Really can't wait to see what would happen next. And what will Sarah be end up? Love your work so much!!
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  • From ANON - Wonkas whore on August 23, 2005
    Wheres the next part???!!!! I need this fic! Its the best thing I have ever read in my life!

    Please, please, please update soon! I love it so much! Its too hot to describe!

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  • From ANON - Wonka Fan on August 22, 2005
    OH MY GOD, YOU MUST UPDATE ASAP! I NEED MORE OF THIS FIC!
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  • From ANON - Hallow\'s Eve on August 22, 2005
    Oh my god! this is soooo awesome! I love how you've captured the darker side of Willy, everyone portrays him as a happy chipper almost childlike character, i've been wanting to write about his darker side too. THis is great, don't stop writing, i love to read this!

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  • From ANON - Romska Noch on August 19, 2005
    In spite of the N/C situation, I found myself working up a bit of, uh, moisture on this one. I quite agree with the previous reviewer on your having his manner of speaking and acting nailed down! Hey Angel, can I sneak into the factory with you??!!?? Maybe he'd do the same thing for an older, experienced woman like me...

    Also, I must confess that I found the Oompa-Loompas' undressing her to be a little bit of a turn-on, so I guess I'm liking the "weird & twisted" so far!

    Bravo!! More, more, more!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Fionara on August 19, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this! You have his way of speaking and acting down very well. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Wicked Seraphina on August 18, 2005
    ...*totally transfixed* ...

    ..mmm... more...
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  • From ANON - A Fan on August 17, 2005
    OMG, you have to update soon, I have to read more!
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  • From ANON - angel on August 17, 2005
    so good! if only his factory was in MY town n i knew that THAT was what happened 2 girls who snuck inside lol...please keep writing!!!
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  • From ANON - Dolores on August 17, 2005
    Awesome! And funny. I v. rarely comment, but that was brilliantly silly and enjoyable. Write more!
    xoxoxDolly
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  • From ANON - yoblossom on August 17, 2005
    ^^ nice chapter... can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2005
    PLEASE write more! your writing style rocks!

    you have me pretty hooked too =B
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  • From ANON - angel on August 16, 2005
    this fic has great potential...please say you're gonna finish this!!!
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