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Reviews for Into the Factory

By : Mesopotamia
  • From Snapeswhore on August 23, 2010
    lmao. i like ur warning on chappie 2. u should continue. u portrayed johnny depps wonka perfectly. it was strangely creepy, funny and arousing at the same time. i'm sure if i should be disturbed by that.
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  • From ANON - Lawr on November 25, 2006
    Write more!
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  • From ANON - Katie on January 26, 2006
    Damn... update soon please
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2005
    man this freakin rocks. i hope you write more. the idea of willy wonka being so cheerful all the time made me wonder......anywaz..you better write more please! heh heh. i like it. please write more.
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  • From ANON - PLEASE STOPPP on November 19, 2005
    it made me feel creepy and not cool because sher wasn't having fun. mr.wanker is scary and i don't want much more fun to be had...
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  • From ANON - Elen on September 27, 2005
    Woha! here we go! ^^
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  • From ANON - Veruca_Salt on September 25, 2005
    awesome..lucky girl.....update asap
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  • From ANON - Mirwais on September 18, 2005
    Oooh I like this one a lot. Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - karkahn on September 17, 2005
    UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please? PLEASE UPDATE?! *sobs brokenly* PLEASE update! This is so amazing I want to read the next part!!!
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  • From ANON - demetersam on September 08, 2005
    CONTINUE....PLEASE!

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  • From ANON - Emme on September 01, 2005
    OMG that was excellent! You absolutely NEED to continue this story. It's very arousing.
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  • From ANON - Justine on August 28, 2005
    Continue please! Hurry!
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  • From ANON - Arden Skysende on August 28, 2005
    You know, i love your lord of the rings fan fic, and your labyrinth fan fic, but this is taking the cake! (although, raalia would if you would finish the story!!lol.) kweep writing
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  • From ANON - batwingedgirl on August 25, 2005
    :O What a horrible thing to leave me hanging, so to speak! It's so hot! Write more! i love rapey!Wonka ^^; Through slightly out-of-character, it does make for some exciting stories! So.. yes.... next chapter!!!! Hurry! O_O
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  • From ANON - EvilCookie on August 24, 2005
    OMG! What a great story. You have totally captured Wonka's evil/dark side... and I must say I LOVE IT! I was actually thinking about writing a N/C Wonka fic. myself, but was afraid of what people might think. Thanks to you, I see that everyone seems to really like a change, so I might be putting my story up as well. Anyways great job and please update soon.
    -EvilCookie
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