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Reviews for Something Sweet

By : Deppgirl
  • From ANON - Lulu on December 26, 2006
    For heavens sake! I just started reading this, and you leave me hanging on chapter 4. I am truly enjoying this. The humor in your writing is making your story fun. Dialogue is really good--Willy Wonka really sounds true to character, which is adorable. Please, please add chapter 5.
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  • From ANON - Oktober Black on August 16, 2006
    Nicely done.
    I can hear the voice of Willy Wonka in your writing, which is excellent.
    I hope you update at some point!
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  • From ANON - musicangel22 on November 12, 2005
    OMG! U my dear are a complete genius! Update and write i HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!*crazed look on her face* Keep up with the good work.
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  • From ANON - Melerella on November 11, 2005
    I agree! Go for it! Your doing great so far. I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Emeraldfire on November 11, 2005
    Oh please can we have some smut??? *on knees begging*
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2005
    OoOooOOOO! I love it so far, but you need to keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Jane on September 28, 2005
    Wow wow wow! I absolutely enjoyed your story! Willy was so funny in it)) I wonder, what's gonna happen next? ;) Please, go on writing))
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  • From ANON - Andi on September 19, 2005
    PLEASE UPDATE!! It was really funny when he choked on a moan and when Annebelle asked him how he did it, he thought "Go on. Tell her you choked on a moan while perving over her legs" HAHAHAHA I could just imagine him saying something like that in his head.

    HURRY WITH THE NEXT ONE!!!
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  • From MaRaMaTSG on September 14, 2005
    ((Across the hall, Willy came out of his bathroom, drying his hair with a towel. “I only took a shower because I’m a firm believer in personal hygiene,” he told himself. “And I happen to prefer cold water. I was not, repeat not, aroused!”))

    I LOVE you for that! Oh and the coma should go after 'repeat' instead of 'not'.
    Althou I find it hard to picture Willy Wonka lusting(Not that I don't like it. :P ) I CAN imagine him saying and doing just that. XD
    Good job! You're the first person I review since my short stay in this place. Can't wait to read more of your story.

    ((“Time for another shower I think,” he muttered, trying to sound cheery.))

    Just can't wait!
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  • From Whytney on September 13, 2005
    Considering I loved the movie, I never thought I'd actually find fanfiction on it, much less a good one. The moment I saw you named your main character "Annabelle", I thought, "Oh great, another Mary Sue". In many ways she is - you described her as extremely slim and pretty, like most female OCs are. Now, seeing as we don't exactly know how old Willy Wonka is (but know that Johnny Depp is around 42) I think it's a little... unrealistic, shall I say, for him to be interested in someone of only 16. Perhaps if she had been at least 20 it might not have been so bad. Anyway, I digress. This fic is simple and nice, and that's often what makes a good story. You portray Willy Wonka perfectly, and your spelling and grammar is almost flawless (another great aspect - nothing bugs me more than someone who doesn't bother to spellcheck...). Humour is essential to keep the readers interested, and you've put that in too. I like to see where this is going. Keep it up ^_~

    ~Phantom Panther~
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  • From ANON - Cassandra on September 06, 2005
    Oh please for the love of god write more!!!!!!!!! I love this story and am looking forward to reading more
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  • From ANON - JJ on September 06, 2005
    gah! i love it!
    please write more soon@_@
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  • From ANON - cutekat on September 05, 2005
    YES smut LOL.. plz continue!
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  • From ANON - WillyWonkaIsMySweetCandyMan on September 03, 2005
    *puts away stick* i'm not afraid to take them out again though if you don;t update real soon lol smut is always good lmao. Especially Willy smut...;D lol
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  • From ANON - Firefly on September 03, 2005
    I just finished reading all of the chapters verygood indeed cant wait for the next chapter
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