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Reviews for Charlie and the chocolate factory, the reunion.

By : jaymclg
  • From shinigami02mistress on September 05, 2010
    aww this is so cute. so is there going to be a chapter 16 at all?
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  • From ANON - echo on May 06, 2009
    love the story and your name is it like david tennant and billi piper ilove dr who
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  • From ANON - Mione on October 25, 2006
    Anymore? I love this story!!!! :)
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  • From DracosDirtySecret on February 11, 2006
    I took a chance & read your fic, even though Willy Wonka isn't my ship of choice. Being a writer myself, I absolutely loath flames, so I will try to make this as painless as possible. Your plot is quite good, even though it moves a little too quickly for my taste, but...You really, really, REALLY need a beta. You are doing yourself a huge injustice by posting your chapters in the shape that they are in. Like I said, you have a really good plot idea, & if you would just take a little more pride in your work, you may get better feedback. Just mho, of course.
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  • From ANON - another on January 12, 2006
    nice story...needs a beta though
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  • From ANON - steph on December 30, 2005
    that was a great chapter, plz continue writing. WILLY/CHARLIE 4EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - jess on December 18, 2005
    very good
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  • From ANON - steph on December 16, 2005
    PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ finish it, i love your story. i want to know what happenes to to charlie and willys lives and that of their children
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  • From ANON - jess on November 23, 2005
    very good update soon

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  • From JackieLeep on November 18, 2005
    I didn't think I would like Wonka/Charlie slash that much, but I found that you handled their relationship really well in this story. Plus, ya know, I thought the sex was pretty darn hot and well described here. It was quite a turn-on, actually. Good work!
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  • From ANON - MoonShine on November 17, 2005
    I was really impressed with how this story was written and I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Hope you post more soon!!!!!!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - child of neverhwere on November 14, 2005
    your in DESPRATE need of a beta... but other than that i liked it
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  • From ANON - Sailor Aurora on November 12, 2005
    This was actually very intersting to read. amusing too.

    although I have to wonder, what is with all the twins? Mrs.bucket even had twins, and she had nothing to do with the chocolate?

    anyway, inform me if you have any other updates following up this, please. ^^
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  • From ANON - Miya Sparrow on November 06, 2005
    oh don't stop there! please don't stop there I need more of this story!!!!!!!!! ahahahaha
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  • From ANON - takkycat on November 06, 2005
    Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I can't wait till the babies are born!!! This is soooo gooooooddd!!!!!!!
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