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Reviews for Lessons In Box 5

By : musicofthenight
  • From RonsAngel100 on February 17, 2007
    I love this story. Its hot and steamy.
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  • From IamtheAngelofMusic on November 27, 2005
    That was quite a story! I can distinctly imagine the lesson taught to that intolerable Vicomte...Erik truly is a genius.

    -O. G.
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  • From ANON - O.G. on November 08, 2005
    It looks like you edit Lessons In Box 5, and from the looks of your reviews it seems like they aren't much help - some of them anyway.

    Advice - I'm sure when you finished this you thought to yourself you could do better. You can, and you will. It's a shame some of these reviews didn't really help you out. Better yet, some of them are really nasty and rude. I know from the looks of it you need help in grammar and spelling. You'll get the hang of it, don't rush when writing, and always remember you'll always get the good and the bad. I think you did rush this a bit and that's fine, we ALL learn from our mistakes.

    Look over your work before you send it to your beta because not everyone is perfect and they too can make mistakes. And before you post review it once more.

    In the mean time, spell check(which I think you're doing now, after so many people telling you that you can't spell, hell even I can't...) and send your works to your beta or beta(s). They'll tell you that this or that didn't sound good, perhaps you might want to do this instead of that. Listen to their advice, as well as listening to your gutt. You'll get it one of these days. Good Job and KEEP writing.
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  • From ANON - Erika Giry on November 06, 2005
    You know, it's not perfect, but it DOES have potential to be really, really good. You certainly are doing a lot better with this.

    It's nice to see you keeping all your comments this time, too, negative AND positive.


    ^.~ Have a lovely night
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  • From ANON - anon on November 05, 2005
    I liked it, abusive Raoul needs to be toned down a little, but it was a decent one shot.
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  • From ANON - Innagottadavita on November 05, 2005
    Your storyline left me way to perplexed. Just what lessons were supposed to be learned in this story? Seemed to me that Christine knew pretty much everything she was supposively being taught and as for Raoul why is it every phangirl has to make him such an abusive prick? Some people have no imagination. Couldn't have looked up a better Harliquin to use huh?
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  • From ANON - phantombaby on November 05, 2005
    oops I meant that to say, that Erik would be the more dominant one!
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  • From ANON - phantombaby on November 05, 2005
    I read your story the first time, you posted it. I think it has improved in that there is better care of the spelling and grammar. The characters seem more fleshed out, although I think that Raoul would not be quite so abusive unless he considered Christine to be a cock tease. I noticed someone reviewed and thought Christine a whore. What I can gather from your story, she and Erik had been together for something like a month, she would be more willing to try anything he suggested and would probably be the more dominant one in the situation.

    Not unreadable and some of the smut was hot. A line I particulary liked was the one that went something like this "I want to look in your eyes when I come in side you"
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  • From ANON - Hauntingly on November 05, 2005
    Okay, this is an insult to Phantom. I mean, most erotic fics themselves are insults to Leroux, but come on. Nothing in here was canon.

    What the Hell. Raoul, IS NOT AN ABUSIVE GUY. K? YEAH. So all of you are going on about Erik, which, blackrosephantom, ITS SPELLED WITH A FLIPPING K. LEARN IT.

    And during this fic I clutched my stomach and dry heaved.

    This is an insult to other writers in this category.

    You need to learn about the characters.

    Puh-leeze. Anyone can write a sex scene with the SUPER HOT HERO and EVIL VILLAN, and of course, WHORE. This story is nothing special. NOTHING SPECIAL. NOTHING.

    (/endrant)
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  • From PhantomsJewel on November 04, 2005
    The idea behind this story isn't all bad but I just feel maybe you kind of rushed this one. I would suggest taking your time as you type your fictions up and then get a friend to look over it before you go posting it. Your spelling errors basically change the context of your story. I don't think you meant to make Christine a tart.

    Looking over some of your other reviews I see some real advice there. Constructive criticism is actually a good thing believe it or not. Always helps to get different reviews.
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  • From ANON - The Green Fairy on November 02, 2005
    You're story rox chick!!! Yesssssss Raoul made Christine a slut..... and then Erik is toking the night away......sweeeeeeet. It's 4:20 in Box 5 awesome chick.....

    Slutz and drug use all in the same fic

    you are my new hero......please make Erik toke some more....high erik is cool....

    See everyone just doesn't get your story. With drugs Erik can do whatever he wants....he can get real small...
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on November 02, 2005
    Its me, da horny bitch again.
    PS everyone, the idea (of Eric fucking Christine up in Box 5) actually, possibly, originally started in an issue of Playboy (or Girl) years ago.
    It was a JUICY story. Christine had attended the opera with Raoul. He took off to get a drink or take a whiz, I don't care. Christine felt alone and scared to be alone in her box, so she got up to look for him. She got lost. She entered what looked like her box. Eric sneaks up behind her, tells her shh, bends her over, hikes up her gown, unzips his pants, and...
    after he helped her do her taxes, AHEM, he kissed her forehead, said thank you, ma chere, then vanished. Christine finally found Raoul in their box. Oddly, the pervert had a smile on his face. Probably a wet spot on his pants too. Eh.
    PPS, geez, Eric and Christine in Music's story are EXHIBITIONISTS!

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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on November 02, 2005
    O_O
    Okay...
    I just read the comments of other readers.
    For those of you whom disliked this tale, you are entitled to your opinion, but don't be sharp as knives about it. Save your shark criticisms to people whom keep on being mean to you. Also, one reader was right: Every writer makes mistakes. Heck, I still do. But I know I have talent. Nothing as great as all of yours, mind you, but still.
    For the author(ess), if this story wasn't wholly your idea, please give credit to where it is due. But that was nice of you to have thanked whomever assisted/inspired you.
    For the reader who said Eric has sexual needs...Hell yeah! And for the other reader who said Eric is sexy when he dominates Christine...Ohhhh yeahhhh...
    Eric...=Druels and faints=


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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on November 02, 2005
    Good evening Music Of The Night,
    This story was both...FUCKING EROTIC...and...BITCHIN HILARIOUS!
    Keep it up, please do.
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  • From ANON - Jadzia on November 02, 2005
    Hello there. I just wanted to say I thought your story was very erotic. Perhaps it is a little too blatant for some people who have trouble seeing Erik as a man with sexual needs, but that's no reason to be so nasty about it. I am sorry to see that you have received so many negative comments, especially as they don't offer much in the way of advice. In my opinion, the only thing you need to adjust is the spelling errors (which is easy enough to fix). I hope that my comments help to convince you that people do enjoy your story and would like to see more. Please be strong and follow your heart. xxx, Jadzia.
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