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Reviews for Lessons In Box 5

By : musicofthenight
  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2005
    You've recently told a few people that you believed this to be your best fanfiction thusfar. Something NEW, fresh! First of all, stealing other people's idea's(and then thanking them for "inspiration")is WRONG, and REALLY, REALLY insulting to the original authors, who actually have TALENT.Second of all... Um...Hon...You haven't had any to date that were any good to compare it with! And this one just takes the cake. Leroux is rolling in his grave, Andrew Lloyd Webber and all those involved with the original musical and movie are contemplating lawsuits, Erik is getting his lasso ready because you STILL can't get his character right...He's not Fabio, dahling...he's ERIK, the Phantom of the OPERA, NOT OPEAR! And Christine just had 13 nervous and mental breakdowns over how you've basically made her into a whore.

    Now I KNOW this is going to be deleted, because you just can't stand that there are people out there who REALLY dislike your writting, and poor baby, you just really can't take bad reviews to save your life. Getting bad reviews is a part of being an author. If you can't take the heat, then do us all a favor and stop typing this trash. Just..stop.
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  • From ANON - POTO Phan on November 02, 2005
    Well I personally think you did an excellent job with this story. As for the spelling and grammar errors ... we all make them (including some of the ones here who pointed out your spelling and grammar errors) ... don't worry about it. Besides, we all know spell check doesn't pick up every misspelled word.

    Anways, great job!! I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Gothic Musings on November 02, 2005
    Oh.My.God. This is just...horrible. How in the hell did such a crappy fic slip through the cracks on this site and get posted? I think I should write the moderators and have them increase that guidelines for posting. Like make a requirement be the story actually BE GOOD! First off, Erik is not like that in any way. Since when did he become as flat as a paper doll? Christine, Jesus, do not get me started at the wet ragdoll you made her. My farts have more personality. And say it with me here: Spell Check. For the fucking love of all that is Phantom, stop writing. First we have a WONTON goddess Chinese Christine soup and now this drivel. You know, if Erik were real, he'd be weeping right now if he saw this poor characterization of him. Oh wait, I may have heard a gentle sob in the distance. Someone should console him by writing something sensational. Just not you. Maybe my cat, who I coincidentally lined his litterbox with a printout of this and it was so bad even he wouldn't crap on it.
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  • From pervertedphantom on November 02, 2005
    Your story was really arousing. I loved how Erik totally dominated Christine and made her his love bitch. You are my hero, I am adding you to my list of my very favorite stories. Have you thought of self publishing? I would buy anything you wrote, you must be very sexually experienced to write such a hot fic. I pleasured myself while reading it

    PP
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  • From ANON - Bella on November 01, 2005
    Ok here's the honest truth...too many simple spelling errors (spell check), grammar ...please pick a verb tense and use it, and Erik is far more complicated that this 8th grade version of him. He has flaws and character traits that are simply nonexistant in this portrayal. Yes there is such a thing as PWP but even it should retain some essence of the characters...this does not. Sorry if you don't like my opinion...you are free to delete it.
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  • From ANON - Opera Rat on November 01, 2005
    I really think you should look over everything before you post it. When you post something you expect others to read and enjoy it should be a good reflection of yourself and your personality. Maybe you have no self respect for yourself but please show some respect to Mr Leroux's work. I realize you may not have time to correct all your spelling eerrors but you could at least spell Phantom of the OPERA correctly.

    On another note actually reading some of the Phantom novels out there could help you better develop your Erik character. I just feel you don't have a grasp of what the character is all about. I realize alot of young teenagers like yourself haven't had the oppertunity to read the great novels that are out there with nothing but the recent movie to draw your Phantom experiances from.





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