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Reviews for The two boys

By : Miyu12
  • From lordoberon on June 10, 2008
    The ending was hilarious. XD "Do you think Aravis has done this?" lol! Love it.

    This was a hot fic. I only wish it had been longer! And more thoughts of both Corin and Shasta.

    But I like the descriptions (more detail, please!) and the characterizations are good. :D
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  • From on February 14, 2007
    A lot of misspelled words, but I have seen worse. Altogether a not a bad story..I'm going to try to rate your story w/ a three for good effort (I guess.
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  • From ANON - harpling on January 12, 2006
    The idea was good, but you really need to get someone (preferably someone with a thorough knowledge of the mechanics of English) to beta and correct this for you. The writing is full of grammatical and spelling mistakes and the dialogue is flat and lifeless. The descriptions are fairly dull and give no real idea of background, place or time. It's a start, but your work needs some serious work.
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  • From pervertedcynic on December 18, 2005
    THAT WAS BLOODY BRILLIANT!
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