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Reviews for The Rules

By : sisterray
  • From Neonette on December 05, 2007
    Please write more! This is very well written; lots of imagery and emotion!
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  • From ANON - Jaci on September 09, 2006
    Please, please, PLEASE update. This is one of the best stories on the whole site, and I'm dying for some new material from you. Please?
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  • From ANON - Nicole on December 24, 2005
    I like the end! Tell me that's not all of it! Sequel!
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  • From semisweetandnuts on December 12, 2005
    I like your Veruca! I didn't like the the turn in the ending though, how out of character for Wonka. A lot of people seem to feel a need to make him "masculine" or brutal, but why not just pick such a character to begin with instead? He really is not, I don't think he ever could be, he could be scary and creepy and merciless, sure, but not brutish or butch like that. But until that turn in the end I appreciated your story. Your Veruca is quite like mine in "Returns and despair".
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  • From ANON - Langley on December 10, 2005
    Beautifully written, you really did an amazing job.

    I'm dying to know what happens next!!

    L.
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  • From JackieLeep on December 09, 2005
    P.S. I can't wait to find out what sweet Willy has in store for Ms. Bitch Cakes!!!
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  • From JackieLeep on December 09, 2005
    Damn! You are right on with your portrayal of Veruca! I find it fascinating that she feels this mixture of anger and desire toward him. Your story is certainly effective, because I REALLY wanted to go kick Veruca's ass all the while I was reading what she was doing to him. I loved the part where she forced him to give her oral pleasure, then thought to herself, "God, where did he learn to do that?"

    Write on!
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  • From ANON - Lina Inverse the Dramata on December 08, 2005
    o.O

    I do no envy Veruca for the revenge he's about to reek. You just successfully managed to make wonka an even SCARIER person then was displayed in the newer movie. I honestly hadn't thought it possible either. *whistles*

    I wonder if he and Charlie are a thing though if he asked about Charlie like that. And what he just might do to her if he is in a coma or something... Anyway yah, interesting story. I don't particularly see how peole like other peoples pain, but I like how she's gonna get her commupence... *grin*
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  • From ANON - Jessica on December 06, 2005
    Please tell me there's more. I beg you, it's so good. I almost died when you ended it.
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