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Reviews for Sleep Tight

By : Elistener
  • From ANON - Prince.Cor on October 27, 2006
    Hey great story i came
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  • From ANON - nigel-incubator-jones on October 26, 2006
    This reads more like a synopsis; the kind of notes one makes when initially thinking out a story or chapter. There is no plot to speak of, your tenses are dreadful, there are misspellings, and why, oh, freaking why, do people write incest stories that don't address the fact that these people are related? This could be any random couple. This could have been an okay one-shot PWP, but it wasn't even fleshed out enough for that, and the sex was boring. Sorry, but next time, think it over a little more and be aware of grammar, tenses, etc.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2006
    to short
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  • From ANON - ms. tingles on February 07, 2006
    you really need to get your tenses right.


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  • From ANON - anon on January 27, 2006
    hmmm
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  • From ANON - emmy on January 26, 2006
    omg this is so cute i love it good work on it
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2006
    Well...It's pretty good, but it seemed to happen too fast. Maybe you could work on a bit of a plot?
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  • From ANON - paulethier on January 24, 2006
    I can see where this is heading, but go on anyways.
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