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Reviews for Just and Magnificent

By : SubOrbital
  • From ANON - Pyro_1 on September 03, 2011
    This is sooo sweet and lovely, if only love could be like that in real life. More please, it is really good and i love it. Please more :)
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  • From lordoberon on January 13, 2011
    I'm sorry, but this was so happy and sweet, I don't think I can read Volume 2 or 3. It's just too much for me. I guess I'm like Peter; I can't handle anymore sadness. Maybe it's because I've lost people in life, and unlike Peter I can't save my loved ones or bring them back, even for a while. I know how Peter felt, when he was in grief. So I'm going to leave my reading and review here, once and for all.

    This was a fantastic fanfic. It was full of emotion. You characterized them all well. I got to see more behind Susan, and the limit of Lucy's love, and so much of Peter and Edmund. I love Edmund's cheekiness, and his awesomeness as the black knight. I even enjoyed Princess Pretty Eyes. Aslan, who is difficult to write, sounded natural in your writing. And you described things well so I could picture them.

    In fact, it was all so captivating, I was captured by it so, that I don't even mind the lack of smut.

    Bravo, bravo!
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  • From lordoberon on January 13, 2011
    VOLUME 1? How is this going to continue? I'm not done yet, but my heart is already broken in little pieces! Please write more quick and let this have a happy ending! This is torture, I'm telling you!
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  • From lordoberon on January 13, 2011
    THIS FANFIC IS FANTASTIC!!!

    Just had to say that before I read the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - jeff on July 28, 2010
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!! When will the rest of Volume 2 and 3 be on this site? I don't how long I can go without them. Please keep writing and posting this masterpiece!
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  • From ANON - Cin Wicked on February 04, 2010
    That was one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've read in a long while! PLEASE tell me you're still writing this.
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  • From ANON - Jian on December 19, 2009
    Damn you! I don't see posting dates, but if you ended the story here... I'll be quite furious with you!

    You've actually got the writer's flair for foreshadowing and shocking the readers. I had gotten to the point where I thought you had straightened Peter out. Then you brought in Ed once again and I was all like... BWAAaaaAAAAH! YOU DID NOT JUST DO THAT! *melts and turns into a pile of brain mush*

    You're also quite evil with sexual tension. Only downside is that I have a feeling that if you do or would have written sex scenes, it wouldn't have been my taste. I've come to get used to extremely graphic and crude language laced with high levels of sexual explicitness and all that fun stuff. =D

    If you see this, I don't mind being emailed to be old if you write more chapters... Evil writer. *mutters to self*
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  • From Viktoria on November 27, 2009
    This story made me cry so many times I'm not sure If I can even believe a happy ending is comming their way. I'm just besides myself with anxiety about what the future holds. this story is so insanely well crafted, an emotional roller coaster of love and loss. And though I am incredibly thrilled with how things are going now- I will be holding my breath until chapter nine.
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  • From lordoberon on November 05, 2008
    ooh,there are more chapters! oh my gosh, this fic is so good! I love it! yess!
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  • From lordoberon on November 05, 2008
    oh my god you have to write more! THis is heartbreaking! Damn you! Your attention to the world of Narnia and the two boys is magnificent (but Peter, how could you be so slow?! nooo!).

    I want to know what happens next! Is there hope, somehow?? More, more! Please!
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  • From EgyptianFire on May 25, 2008
    In the most honest and genuine of terms, I tell you...I have said to some that their stories are the elite, the top, the best.

    But never, in my entire life of reading, reviewing and writing stories, have I come across one such as this.
    Your warning said to bring tissues, I didn't believe I would need any.
    Oh how I was wrong.
    This story drew me into the depths of agony and to the upmost skies of bliss. I was connected so deeply to every chapter, every sentence, every MOMENT..that I could feel physically ill, sick, and in anguish.
    When I was done, I took another moment to cry, laugh, and then breathe life in a different way.
    Even now as I have finished, taken a break and thought, I can feel a pain similar to a dagger near my heart. Peter's pain was so accurately portrayed, so real, that I now must draw myself out of it.
    Would you please post the other volumes to this? I'd like to hear what you think. Please, feel free to send me an email.

    You ARE the best. I promise you, NOTHING can stand in comparison to this.

    Above all else, thank you for capturing them. Perfectly.
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  • From ANON - J. Chung on November 27, 2006
    Hello! Wonderful story, and I've also read Lest We Forget, and I had to say that it was a tear-jerker for me. I'm very interested to read the other two chronicles that you've mentioned at the end of Just and Magnificent, and if it's possible, please send it to sveigonmalfoy@hotmail.com. Once more, congratulations on a story that's magnificently written and thanks in advance.
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  • From ANON - kittyme2 on November 22, 2006
    I love it! Please publish the other two volumes. I'm just dying to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Lara on October 26, 2006
    that was totally awwwwesome! I loved that last cliffhanger, and am really interested in the other volumes you talked about. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Ho-sama on September 25, 2006
    Ahhhhhhhh!!! Oh! This is maybe the best fic I've ever read! You are SUCH an amazing writer. I got all pulled into this story. I was getting anxious so many times about Edmund's comings and goings and for poor Peter's despair. EEEE! And I LOVED the end. I would love to see more of this. My gosh, this was amazing. Yes, I did cry a few times. Ha ha ha! Awww.....
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