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Reviews for Richard

By : outlawblue
  • From bsoffia on August 20, 2007
    Yes!!! I want more!! please!!! God it would be great to see JC and Richard together.
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  • From bsoffia on August 20, 2007
    *blushes* this is real hot! better read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - mimy on September 05, 2006
    This story is very hot. Please add another chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - jeazard on May 28, 2006
    You'd deserve this reviwe simply for writing this fic, you know that? aff.net is a huge archive and right now yours is the only Anita Blake story in here. Which is just wrong and I guess oyu see my point. ^^x
    So: first of, it's a little irritating to read Jean-Claude being shortened to JC. I must admit that I only realized you did it after a few paragraphs because I tend to call him that, too. *laughs* Other than that it's nice to have a point of view other than Anita's for once. seeing that ths fic is mostly about JC and Richard it's kinda the only *possible* POV because Anita would be a bystander and Richard would myke my head explode with his (self) doubt. o_Ox It would take *days* to put his thoughts into words; JC accepts himself and their relationship better, so his thoughts are clearer.

    I searched the world wide web for nice, nc-17 rated fanfics, but came up with a very disappointing amount, so every piece I find is a reason for great joy. XD You made my day with this, especially since I just finished Cerulean Sins and have to wait two days or so for the next book to arrive (*hits herself for nor ordering sooner*). Please keep up the great work! ^_^x

    ~jeanne
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  • From ANON - asuka on May 14, 2006
    hey, good ficlet! It was sexy, and you write well, and I enjoyed seeing Jean-Claude's point of view on the event. (ohh, I would love to see them become a true threesome in the books, but no T_T so glad there are fics to do it instead.)

    If I may nitpick, though? using abbreviations instead of the full word is kind of jarring. I know triumvirate can be annoying to type out many times in a row, but TRI doesn't mean anything. Same with Jean Claude and JC -- he doesn't refer to himself as JC; I don't think anyone in the books actually calls him JC; I was wondering who you were alking about. Might I suggest you write with the abbreviated versions (JC, tri) and then do a search and replace? I was thrown out of the story a couple of times because of that, and I almost stopped reading, which would have been too bad because it's a good fic aside from that little thing.

    (oh and wolf = loup. XD Loupe means magnifying glass. XD)

    I wonder if you're going to write more. I know i'll read it if you do. ^____^
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  • From ANON - Sabriel_0405 on May 14, 2006
    I really enjoyed this POV scene. Everyone was in character and it really felt right. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - Chrysler on May 14, 2006
    I like this, it's really good so far. It seems that its more of a Richard/Jean claude fic-which is an interestly cute couple-than an anita/jean claude, but i guess i'll have to keep reading to find out, update soon please
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  • From ANON - Firuze on May 11, 2006
    I read it back at PdS, but I haven't reviewed it there. I hope you are still thinking in doing a sequel, because I'd read it eagerly.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 29, 2006
    Is this story finished? Nice pov of JC and his feelings for Richard.
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