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Reviews for Slave to His Whim

By : Pyrite
  • From En4cerMax on October 26, 2008
    Pssst... Chapter 3 and Chapter 4 are the same. Chapter 4 repeated Chapter 3. Just to let you know. Like the story thus far.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 19, 2008
    umm whats with chap 31 i dont get it? :S
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  • From moonpanther33 on July 14, 2007
    I love you story! I just came a crossed it yesterday and read all of it...But I think you skipped a part in between chapters 30 and 31.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 29, 2006
    im really confused about ch. 31...it doesnt flow right....update again soon
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  • From ANON - Cymbidium on June 17, 2006
    A great story. A cruel Erik, yet strong and very sexy. Great descriptions of both Malika and Erik and what they were feeling. Erik raping Malika was hot. I hope you update.
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  • From ANON - nobody on June 04, 2006
    um, she's not a virgin if he's had her. "Good my little virgin?" Yeah, she's not a virgin anymore.
    Duhr.
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  • From ANON - conncoll06 on May 10, 2006
    update soon please...what an awesome story!!!
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