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Reviews for An Alliance Forged

By : Rusalka
  • From IsaacSapphire on December 05, 2008
    Very nice. I like the idea of the loophole and I very much appreciate your introducing Lucivar to the idea of m/m at the beginning of the story; gives him some time to think over the idea so there's no reason he should be figuratively running around in circles screaming when Daemon turns him on.
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  • From ANON - Vittani on September 21, 2006
    Hey this was one of the best black jewels fan fictions ive ever read. I love it. Write more please. Dont care what its about but keep writing black jewels fiction. Love Daemon and Lucivar, please write more.
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  • From ANON - Morianna on August 22, 2006
    I loved this story. You really do good witht he male Slash, but i do have one thing. It the scene that you story looks back on Lucivar says that he got enough of that in the hunting camps. He knows about males pleasuring each other so a different start would have been a bit better. Well i like their meeting an deverything, i really don't think that is how it went but everybody has personal opinions. And in daughter Daemon also says the in the whore chothes scene that he can't react that way not now. Dorothea can know that he can react that way and well i love the rin loup pole, i don't think that we should ovr look things like that. Now don't get me wrong i love your story i just have some little problems with it i am in no way tell you to chane and if fact it you wish just ignore me competley. If you don't think i am right then ok but the scene with Daemon Lucivar starts on 116. the part i am talking about i believe in on 118. One more thing i really don;t think that Daemon or Lucivar would use the wrod fuck or fucking. Anne didn't uses those words so i don't think that we should either but once again jjust me....anyway loved your atroy an i really think you should write more!!
    Truly,
    Morianna
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