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By : Spike119
  • From ANON - Ishtar1917 on September 16, 2006
    Naive'n'sloppy.
    What's with this no-drug thingie that I see in each one of your fics? I bet you never tried 'em yourself and have no friends who do them to say that a person can stop so easily. Believe, what you call love won't help even the slightest bit in the situation. If this "no-drug" propoganda can be forgiven in your fic "the Letter" than here it's plain stupid and uncalled for. The relationships in your fics develop too fast. I sincerely doubt that a 30-year-old virgin, even if it's Sherlock Holmes, will be so eager to have sex. He may really-really want it, but what about fear. In your fic not only he gets into a sexual relationship, but into a homosexual one. And there isn't any sign in your fic of him coping with it.
    One more point: w2hy do you reapeat your "inventions" in different fics? This brandy, cigar and Holmes thing. You have a lot of descriptions that travel from fic to fic. I do not believe your language is really this poor.
    I liked the first part of "the Letter", but it goes silly in the next two chapters. You really must stop this antidrug campaign.

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    My advice for you is to grow up a bit and to read some good books.
    Don't feel to upset, your fic's ok for a 16-17 year old.
    I'won't lie, I have seen worse fics.
    3 out of 5.
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  • From ANON - Aeronwyn on August 07, 2006
    Such a great fic! The writing is excellent and I loved the fluffiness of it - the whole thing with Holmes telling Watson his real name was so sweet, and that he used Watson's first name too. And, the sex was pretty damn good too! lol.
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  • From ANON - pandapony on August 03, 2006
    This is very very lovely! I really enjoyed the image of the two of them warming each other by the fire, and Holmes' nervous hesitancy. Hot sex too. Thank you so much! I look forward to more from you.
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