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Reviews for Love Story

By : PeterH
  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    Nightwish is a kewl band.


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  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    Christine bathing herself in the large rub. Tub, not rub. Although I imagine that Erik desires to rub her down.


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  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    BLOODY HADES...what a naughty dream. O_O!
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  • From ANON - brp on December 11, 2006
    A man went over her mouth. A hand, not a man.


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  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    guests to leave hi(s) home immediately.
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  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    How inconsiderate of him. They were supposed to plan their wedding together. Not we marry tonight real quick, then have a quicky after. XD.


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  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    How dare anywhere X (anyone) interrupt him while he was a woman;
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  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    Christine's body, not Christine...body
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  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    Okay...

    I like for Erik to take charge. But sheesh. He overdoes it sometimes.


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  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    Some naughty scenes are HOT. Others start to get hot, then...need better words to continue describing the rest of the potentially hot scene.


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  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    Some sentences need to be separated. Some parts of the story seem rushed.

    Some parts of the story are well-written and highly descriptive.

    Erik is both sexy and sinister.
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  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    you’re…status. Your, not you're.

    Shorten and organize the background stories of the two main characters.


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  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    Some sentences need commas. Close to the end of Chapter 1, Christine saw (the) man. With out=without.


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  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    They were perfectly shaped and look(ed) (God forgive her) delicious.



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  • From ANON - BRP on December 11, 2006
    Michael Angelo=Michaelangelo.
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