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Reviews for In the Midst of Battle

By : Oceanloversix
  • From Lycan_Jedi on April 24, 2017

    This is a great story!  I'd love a second Chapter!


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  • From Safir84 on December 01, 2009
    Shit, this one-shot, sure was pretty intense and dark, wow! I liked it even though it contained N/C scenes and whatnot! The plot’s great and so was the character portrayal as well, as the character interaction and everything was well written! The “so called” rape/sex scene was also great, very nicely described even though it was indeed N/C, oh well!

    A sequel would be nice sometime in the near future; “Don’t die Eragon . . . . After this war is over and which ever side has one, I’m returning, for you.” Quoting Murtagh, hehe! Ps. I spotted a typo; you simply misplaced a few letters and left some out! No worries, though!


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  • From sailorpinklori on June 13, 2009
    ... Am I really twisted if I think this should replace what actually happened? I would like to see Murtagh go through with his promise to come back for Eragon.
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  • From ruleroftravels on March 14, 2008
    Intense! Really great story, you got the characters down pat, and you write with very nice imagery. Way to go!
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  • From lordgriffin on March 05, 2008
    Unfortunately I think the author has too long ago posted this and will never see this, my praise nor my request. what a GREAT story for a change where these 2 don't end up falling madly in love with each other, I am curious if the author or anyone else, would contact me about an alternate ending story about Sapheria and Eragon actually losing ultimately to Galbatorix, so Sapheria coudl actually be bread her true name discovered contact me at lordgriffin@earthlink.net
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  • From LJofTheDarkThrone on August 09, 2007
    This made me do the Bill Clinton laugh. "Heh, heh, heh. (With a touch of "haw")."

    That is a pretty good thing, btw.
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