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Reviews for Zero Hour

By : lordoberon
  • From TwilightScribe on January 14, 2011
    Gah, I wanted to respond to your reviews SO BADLY but AFF doesn't have that function and your email is hidden so I suppose this is the next best option (it helps that I really love this fic. ;D). Yes, I love it.

    I wanted to address two of the questions/points you brought up in my Narnia fics. One was about the Telmarines and Spanish. According to the sources I have, the Telmarines were originally Spanish pirates who found their way into Narnia through a cave. Hence, the Spanish wouldn't be too much of a stretch as a sort of 'courtly' language or something – plus, in the Prince Caspian movie at least, most if not all the Telmarines who have spoken lines have a very definite Spanish accent.

    As for your question about whether or not Fireside Mistletoe fits into a larger continuity, that's a yes. I'm working on a much longer fic for that pairing and I wrote Mistletoe to fit into that continuity. I'll eventually have it posted here once I've written more of it. I'm also very flattered that you liked my fics so much.
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  • From Safir84 on May 29, 2010
    Awesome story you’ve got here, I loved it! And it was my second time reading a fic with this particular pairing, as well! Anyway, the plot’s great and so was the character portrayal and character interaction too, of course! Everything was also well written and the smut was totally steamy and very nicely described indeed!

    Now, I’m off to read the sequel, see ya!


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  • From emilyjean on May 11, 2009
    holy smack
    that was hot
    drove me crazy thinking about
    good job can't wait to read the other story
    :)
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  • From sapphiretrini on January 05, 2009
    enjoyed this a lot! *HOT* fans self lol goes off to see if there is a sequel XD
    only thing wrong was no lube? *shudders*
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  • From Blahsblah2001 on December 02, 2008
    Awesome!! Very realistic, improbable without going out of character. Only problem I have- no lube. You have to use lube, even if it's as simple as fifteen seconds of head beforehand. It's not perfect but it's infinitely preferable to going in dry.
    Other than that, brilliant story!
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  • From pontaloon on November 28, 2008
    i love how Edward is described as beautiful and graceful yet hes still the top! i do think you use 'hard' too much in the beginning chapters though. im gonna read the sql now!
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  • From andrea87 on July 28, 2008
    Hm I enjoyed this fic. Edward/Jacob is my otp. Loved the sex scenes. Very "intense"
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  • From Shiauko on February 07, 2008
    Yum. It was a pairing I knew SOMEONE would do eventually. And I guess Edward found his belt?
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  • From alleycat88 on February 07, 2008
    wow....that was breathtaking! I love that pairing! In the books i wondered how it was gonna work out with Bella being Jacob's mate and Edwards love...I am hoping they all share :) but that probably wont happen :( But at least in fics like this it does ;) This was entirely too good and I definately want a sequel!
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  • From Curiosity494 on January 28, 2008
    If you can't decide you could have them switch roles, although that might make the story longer. Anyway, this is a great story. (I almost constantly check to see if its updated!)
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  • From HawkChic on January 27, 2008
    Hun, I'm gonna say Edward on top. *looks around* Reasons? I read another Edward/Jacob recently and Jacob topped. So... I'd kinda like to see something different. But in this story, Jacob seems more of a bottom to me than a top. But hey, it's your story.

    I loved it by the way; this is one of my favorite non canon ships (Next to Edward/Jasper and Jasper/Jacob.). So I can't wait to see more of this in the future!

    Viridian Kat.
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  • From ANON - BennyPeace on January 27, 2008
    Edward. I feel like it wouldn't feel as good for Jacob because Edward isn't warm, but it would feel great for Edward because Jacob is so hot.
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  • From Denizen on January 26, 2008
    Why don't you just try putting one on the bottom and then the other to see which one sounds better. On one hand, Jacob should be on top because he is bigger physically, but on the other hand, Edward should be on top because he is older. I can;t really decide, because I think both would be good on either top or bottom. Why not write both?
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  • From HawkChic on January 10, 2008
    *drools* Hun, keep it up! I absolutely love it! *thinks hard for a moment* Is someone going to walk in on them? I'd find it terribly amusing if Sam did... >.< My head is being filled by plot bunnies again. But anyways, I love it and I can't wait to see some more!
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  • From HawkChic on December 28, 2007
    Ne! Don't end it there! I just HAVE to know what happens next! By the way... I'm hoping that Jacob isn't turned and that Edward doesn't kill him (it's rather obvious that Edward is going to drink some of Jacob's blood). But you'll need to explain what will happen when this does! As werewolves are designed to hunt and kill vampires, they'd most likely be immune to the venom (so it will have no effect on Jacob); and secondly, they heal incredibly fast, so this naturally means that they're able to recover blood quickly.

    All in all, it does make for a reliable donor; as long as you don't completely drain the werewolf to the point of death.

    Looking forward to more soon, and hoping that this helped, even if it is just slightly, or that you enjoyed it.

    Viridian Kat.
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