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Reviews for Rain Upon Thee

By : caughtinthestorm
  • From Twilightlover on December 20, 2011
    I can't wait for you to update :)
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  • From RogueMudblood on June 13, 2010
    Juat so you know: "Vous êtes bienvenu, maintenant venu dessus laisse aller" does not say what you want it to. Online translators take the language you are writing in and then change it to the formal words used in the language you seek. What she should have said: "De rien, maintenant, allons-y!" Just a tip for you in future writing: you may want to learn something of the second language (or have someone who knows it check your work) if you intend to use it and not just italicize or otherwise note it.
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  • From ANON - chesterzerousygirl on June 07, 2009
    please update

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  • From ANON - Dee on December 10, 2008
    I like what you've written so far. I'm really intrigued by the idea of Jasper and Alice having a relationship with a girl. Threesomes are difficult to develope because of the amount of trust and attraction that must be shared by all participants. There are many ways for a relationship like this to come about and I'm interested in seeing how you bring them together. Alice was a character I really loved in the books, but I also found myself pulled in by Jasper's personality and history. It's not hard to imagine a girl being drawn not just to each as an individual but also together as a couple. You write very well, and I hope to read more in the future. :)
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  • From KagesSanzo on December 09, 2008
    This story is pretty good so far. I can't wait to see what comes next! I would appreciate it if you could keep me updated on when you post more. My email address is dragonfire10514@yahoo.com. Really great job!
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  • From elvinwitch on December 02, 2008
    Please write more, I really like the story. I've been looking for a plot like this one for a while and this is the only one I could find! Please continue writing!
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  • From ANON - PRincess Alexandria on December 01, 2008
    I like what you've started here. Alice is my favorite Cullen, so seeing someone interested in her is nice. I thought you might like a gentle prod to post more, if your muse agrees.
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  • From ANON - kasumixkira on November 30, 2008
    This is a darling story. It's so interesting. I love it and can't wait to read more.
    I hope you get lots of inspiration bunnies to nibble on you. XD And good luck with all the editing and re-writing. Difficult stuffs, I know.

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  • From XoverAddict on November 05, 2008
    Yeah, let me know when this gets updated, it's really great so far! I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Gothic_Angel on July 28, 2008
    I love this!!! Update Soon please! :)
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  • From ANON - purplekitsunechan on April 28, 2008
    This sounds like an awesome story so far. I hope to read more soon.
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  • From Ehlwyne26 on April 03, 2008
    Like your other story, I absolutely love this!

    Although that continuity of the story is off, the concept of it is intriguing and I'm curious as to how it will all play out.

    I hope you continue to update and write more on this story, it really is good.

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  • From ANON - Brittany on March 11, 2008
    hey so this is the first twilight fan fic i hav read but it is very good. i was a lil sad to see that you started it in dec and havent updated it. i really want more and i love alice. please please please give me some more to read.
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  • From ANON - Kay on February 24, 2008
    Wow... This is really intriguing. Please continue.
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  • From TheRavenEmerald on February 18, 2008
    Oh wow. I'm already addicted. This is easily the best story of the Twilight fanfics. Please, please continue. You're using my favorite Cullen (Alice) as a supporting main. This is orgasmically cool.

    --Raven
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