Reviews for Everything She Always WantedBy : tr0ubLe |
Good, solidly good. Well written, well edited. Not sure Edward would have given in quite so easily, but it is nice to see Bela trying to assert herself in their relationship, something Meyers didn’t do much of in the series. I don’t know how to say this, but I feel like the story is lacking in the heat and passion of a first love affair, I just didn’t feel the excitement, the tension, and the release that the characters should have been feeling. Keep at it, way better than most!
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