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Reviews for Friction

By : laurluh
  • From LaMariposa3795 on June 18, 2009
    Damn!! That was so frickin hot!!!
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  • From Shimi1990 on April 28, 2009
    Very nice story I must say ... It would be very interesting if Edward walked in on them...seems like a good second chapter, maybe a little threesome action?
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  • From phonic36 on March 26, 2009
    That was terrific Laura, a great piece on what would have happened in that scene in the book if Steph Meyer wasn't determined to keep it G/PG. I hope you write again soon, you have talent. Thanks.
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  • From LiteraryBeauty on December 03, 2008
    Out of character for both Bella and Jacob, not enough build-up and the dialogue was embarrassing. Keep it up though, because there's lots of room for improvement.
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  • From Aloysius34 on September 16, 2008
    Please let there be a round two coming soon!!
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  • From faithkry on September 12, 2008
    I'm not that big of a fan of J/B stories. but this on was awesome!!!! I loved it. Keep up the work. I think you should have a part two. If you do let me know please.
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  • From EmmiheartsTwilight on September 07, 2008
    This was an amazing piece of work. The descriptions were perfect, and I'm glad to see someone took that certain scene further... I absolutely adored it!

    You are an excellent author, and can't wait to read more from you
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