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Reviews for Black Heart

By : foxyoxy3
  • From LaMariposa3795 on June 18, 2009
    AW man....I had hoped that she would tell him to stay....damn.....well I hope you do in fact write a oneshot where Bella and Jacob end up together...I'll be looking forward to it! This was still a pretty hot story though!!
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  • From vinh on January 13, 2009
    I have to say the ending was meh after all that build up.
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  • From sonyabrady1971 on December 04, 2008
    LOVED IT!!!!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU NEXT STORY. :~)
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  • From SubtlePen on November 16, 2008
    I'm new to reading fan fic. 99% of what's out there (other than this site) seems to be written by horny 12 year olds. this was the best piece of fan fic I've read yet. very well written, and IMHO totally in keeping with the spirit of the original characters in tact. my only comment is to clean up the very few typos. I hope you decide to write more! cheers -
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  • From lordoberon on September 11, 2008
    Oh my god you've got to continue this! It is SO HOT!!

    I love it! I'm not usuusally a Jacob/Bella person but I do like Jacob so I decided to read this. Jacob is HOT, I wish people would write more fics with him in them.

    I love your descriptions, very detailed, and also your characterization of both Bella and Jacob is SPOT ON and feels like it really is them, like from the books.

    I eagerly await the next steamy chapter! What will happen next?!
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