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Reviews for Honeymoon

By : katherineGomm
  • From Blahsblah2001 on February 22, 2009
    Commas.
    Capitalization.
    Speech goes like this:
    "I think it might rain," he said.
    "I think I agree," she agreed, looking out the window. "It's windy, too."
    New speaker, new line.
    Again, capitalization.
    Re-read your story before posting. Spell checking is not enough. A spell checker will not notice the error in the phrase "He piqued my up after school."
    Betas are nice, but it's also useful to sleep on a story and then re-read it the next day.
    You will get more readers if the words in your summary are spelled correctly. Seeing a sloppily written summary does not give us much hope for the story.

    Being forced to write in school is supposed to teach you these things. It's not a burden. Enjoy it. (Polish this up, turn it in, see what happens! School can be fun if you make it!)
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  • From FlnFroggie on February 19, 2009
    I love that version of their honeymoon. It is a great story keep up the good work.
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  • From on January 07, 2009
    Really excellant! God i wish i was Bella sometimes! Very good job! Keep it up!

    ~*~*~*~*
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  • From goldenlioness99 on January 06, 2009
    Perfect, perfect, perfect! I love Twilight as much as the next person, but after 3 1/2 books, I was hoping for a more detailed description of their honeymoon. Good job!
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