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Reviews for One big mistake

By : Roseann1013
  • From phonic36 on March 26, 2009
    I like this chapter, and I like your story. You write Bella very well, very much like Meyer does, which is to your credit. I detest the Jacob character in the books, but you make it realistic how it happens. I look forward to the next chapters, thanks for writing.
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  • From on March 08, 2009
    Nice start. I'll read more as soon as I've got a little more time. Really thank you for your review, too. Well written? English isn't even my native tongue nor an official language here. This wasn't even beta read by anyone. LOL I'll be greedy to read more of this soon. ;)
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  • From fallenangel7583 on January 16, 2009
    great story, and you pulled it in at a great time between the books and the drama there. I love it, you did a great job capturing the characters personalities. absolutely wonderful job.
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  • From on January 14, 2009
    This is really good... I really hope this is continued. I sat here for like the last 45 minutes reading this. OMG, i want to be Bella....
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  • From squims on January 14, 2009
    Another wonderful chapter! I love the realistic emotions, Edward's show of jealousy and self-loathing...all of it!
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  • From squims on January 13, 2009
    Great chapter! I think I was just as shocked as Bella that Edward forgave her!
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  • From Emeraldfires on January 13, 2009
    There are lots of spelling errors, but you write so passionately I easily could overlook that. Please continue soon!
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  • From goldenlioness99 on January 11, 2009
    This is great! Update soon!
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  • From katherineGomm on January 10, 2009
    rose,

    i like the story. i like that it is realistic in its emotional aspect. many people have made similar mistakes. i can't wait to read more and find out the reprecussions of Bellas rash decision.

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  • From squims on January 10, 2009
    I'm generally not a fan of fics where Bella just runs & hops into bed with Jake, but this one is different. I like that you have kept Bella true to Edward in her heart & mind even though she's done something completely different with her body. Very well written, and a good take on a situation that is absolutely realistic in its emotional issues and conflicting feelings/actions. Can't wait to read more!
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