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Reviews for This Christmas

By : LittleWing
  • From lordoberon on January 31, 2011
    wow....just wow...I wasn't sure how I felt aboutt his at first, I thought it was just a fun fic...then I realized that *no one* was a vampire...and as the James/Edward thing got more intense, I got more into it (so wrong!). I am happy that there is a sequel....and I feel that Jasper is hiding his true feelings...

    It is interesting to see them all not be vampires. I would've thought it would be boring, but the dynamics between all 4 were so interesting that they hooked me. Edward and his hair thing and his dead mother...Jasper hiding feelings...James with the hots for Edward and his swtiching from hot to cool...Victoria and her being so passionate while also treating Jasper and Edward well...it was a very interesting, unique fic. And even though there wasn't any smut...I was intrigued, and I sortof wished there -had- been smut, between James and Edward or Jasper and Edward....or hey, even Jasper and Victoria! heh.

    Anyway, yummy little fic...I plan to go read the sequel!
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  • From dmdarklord on January 25, 2009
    That was really well written. I loved it :) I really enjoyed how you wrote Edward OOC, making him vulnerable and easily toyed with. And pairing him up with Jasper on their shopping trip was just icing on the cake for me!

    I know this is a lot to ask, but I saw that it is a 3 part series, and I was wondering if you could email me when you post the next part? My addy is: dmdarklord@hotmail.com

    You did a brilliant job, and I hope you keep sharing your amazing work!
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