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By : MrsJasperHale
  • From DarkKaoru on January 29, 2009
    Ahh, so much angst! I loved it! and YESSSSSSSSSS hot hot lemon chapter. I have to say I really loved how you portrayed all the Cullens when facing Edward after the incident. I pictured it kinda different, everyone really being more worried and reassuring than pissed and lecturing, but it actually worked better your way! First time I see a cold Carlisle, a SICK-worried Rosalie, etc. You did an awesome job at their characterization! And the talk between Edward and Bella at lunch was very tense and did not ended up as "I love you Edward-I love you to, Bella" with the rainbow shining and unicorns passing through! It just ended in a kinda ackward and un-resolved status... which is rare in fics where this couple has a difficult situation. I'm loving it!! can't wait for the Lemon-Stravaganza :)
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  • From MrsJasperHale on January 28, 2009
    okay i've changed my mind
    jasper is always at the cafeteria because....... he visits the school every day so he can have lunch with alice and he drives her to school in the morning.
    better? this way we dont have to bullshit ourselves by saying he is younger :)
    problemo fixed!
    ; )
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  • From MrsJasperHale on January 28, 2009
    i know that and it pissed me off that he was older than Alice but i wrote him into the story because he's like my favourite character *pokes username*
    let's pretend he's repeating a year or he is one year younger shall we? i just like the idea of him being there...
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  • From Foxmore on January 28, 2009
    I love this fic. I hope you update again soon!

    I only have one problem with it, and it is only because I have a few pet peeves when it comes to Jasper, and not the actual story. He already graduated with Emmet and Rosalie, so why would it be odd that he wasn't in the cafeteria? Unless he goes just to see Alice (which who could blame him). Eh, no big, though. At least you never called him Jasper Cullen... that would call for some bitch slappen. haha.

    Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From MrsJasperHale on January 28, 2009
    this is for all the people that may think that i've finished writing - i'm not! i plan to still add a few more chapters i swear! i love writing!
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  • From opalwebb on January 28, 2009
    I think that this is a great story. I hope you keep writing. What bothers me most is people who start a great story and then doesn't finish it. I love this story so far. Keep up the good work.
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  • From SavannahLion325 on January 28, 2009
    You're putting this story together so beautifully that I'm checking for updates way too often. Keep it up and don't be afraid to wind it out. This still has a good few chapters you can crank out.
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  • From on January 27, 2009
    YEAH!! I love waking up in the morning to new chapters and new reviews!!! Thank you very much for yours btw... And excellant job with this chapter. You really got into Edward's mind here it was very realistic. I felt his pain. I couldn't tear my eyes away, it was SO good
    Great Job, can't wait for the next update. And I promise to update "Real" as well, as soon as my zoology hw pile diminishes slightly. (UGH)
    Anyway, fantastic job! Keep going!

    ReddTwilight
    ~*~*~~*~*~*~
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  • From smcbelle on January 26, 2009
    GAH!

    I want more chapters, please!!! It's awesome.
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  • From DarkKaoru on January 26, 2009
    The Jasper scene was genius. And I love how you portrayed the confusion, sadness and that emotional turnmoil with Bella. This is good writing! please update soon. I'm dying to see how's EPOV of everything.
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  • From DarkKaoru on January 26, 2009
    OMG, please write more and keep feeding my perv and obsessed twilight mind. This is the first fic I read where Edward actually gets to hurt her physically while doing it... not even to think he'll kinda rape her in a GORE-ish way! This is so fuckup and I love it!! please update ASAP, I'll be reading AND reviewing fo'shoo!
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  • From on January 26, 2009
    Very well done! I like that you used Jasper, he is very appropriate here considering his abilities. I can't wait for the next chapter, and was so glad that this one ended on a happy note. I'll be looking forward to reading more all. Now I can't wait to get back from zoology! Yeah, all excited!!!!
    Great Job

    ReddTwilight
    ~*~*~*
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  • From on January 25, 2009
    OMG update asap!!! Holy crap REALLY GOOD!!! Got me all excited for the next chapter!!! REALLY LOVE IT!!! Great job!!!!
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  • From InkHeart17 on January 24, 2009
    This is fantastic! So well written and completely in-character. I look forward to the next chapter. I loved the cafeteria kiss!
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  • From Roseann1013 on January 23, 2009
    i really enjoyed that!
    Update soon! You write very well.
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