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Reviews for Destiny Awaits

By : Lollydolly
  • From reaper07 on April 06, 2009
    this story is absolutely amazing. keep the updates coming!!!
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  • From caliha on April 05, 2009
    Serious review this time.

    The reason I like your fanfic is that you actually give Isabella a brain. I read the Twilight series and can't say I'm a fan at all. The series was like a uppercut to the Feminist movement. This fic was recommended to me by a friend and I kind of rolled my eyes at first but this is really good. I think in the book Bella was too fawning over Edward and seemed to forget she was her own person with her own thoughts and feelings-- a separate entity from Edward and his wishes. You're doing really well showing how possessive Edward is in a sense, don't do this Bella, go here Bella, you're only a poor weak fragile human Bella...yada yada. Chapter 11, where she yanks her hand from Edwards and reminds him she isn't a possession. I loved it!
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  • From AceSpades on April 04, 2009
    Yay an update. Oooo looks like Jaspers thoughts are blocked to Edward only when Bella is around. I love how you wrote Edwar it was so perfectly....Edward lol. I cant wait for more please update again very soon.
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  • From RoxieCullen454 on April 04, 2009
    *GASPS*
    Oh my freaking crap, that was AWESOME!!!! First off, I love how she's tired of Wuthering Heights, even though it's her favorite. I think it represents Edward and her moving away from him. Second, that was such a cool twist that Edward couldn't hear Jasper temporarily. I thought it would last longer; too bad for him. It would've been perfect for him to be able to keep his new feelings/internal conflicts from Edward. But WOW Edward really over-reacted and made completely wrong connections when trying to piece things together. Wrong secret!
    But OMG it's sooo good!! Please update ASAP!
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  • From spotted3star on April 04, 2009
    omygawsh, i love this story. it's not like any of the others i've read, its unusual and new. but it Holds My attention! Thank you to the author, and i'm looking forward to the next chapters to come!
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  • From makki on April 04, 2009
    poor edward. bella's really hurting his feelings! D:
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  • From Roseann1013 on April 04, 2009
    Once again, great chapter. I hope you keep going with this story.
    Update soon
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  • From daftwoman on April 02, 2009
    I love your story! You do such a great job with your character development. I can't wait for the next instalment! Thanks!
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  • From Twilightslove on April 02, 2009
    Best story ever, u have to keep it coming i get on here every day when i get off work to see if it's updated yet! not many people are into the jasper bella thing but i LOVE IT!!!! and ur writing totally keeps the interest up!
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  • From JustBella on April 01, 2009
    Ok, first, whenever I get halfway down the page (scroll bar-wise) I get upset that I'm halfway through with the new chapter. Second, this story is just so...amazing. At the very end of each chapter, I'm always wanting more! This last chapter (10) was great. I feel bad for Edward because I want Jasper to love Bella and vice versa. But then, I'd feel bad for Jasper if Bella stayed with Edward. I really think you are doing a great job establishing a relationship between Bella and Jasper. And I'm anxious to see where you take Bella and Edward (and how you do it). Great work! Don't make us wait too long!


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  • From makki on March 31, 2009
    I utterly love you. This fic simply makes my day, evening, and week no matter what chapter i am reading! thank you so so so much and plz post again soon!
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  • From RoxieCullen454 on March 31, 2009
    AWESOMENESS, total awesomeness!!!! I couldn't have been happier when I checked on the website today (particularly for your update, as I've been continuously doing over the weekend) and found you had posted a new chapter!! It was incredible! And I love that it was quite long! Great to see the turmoil in Jasper as he keeps falling for Bella without realizing it. "Edward was going to have to learn to share if he didn't kill me. There was no way I would give up something as special as Bella." That was probably my fav quote of this chapter, but I found the first part of it to be hilarious in context. Edward is getting irritating, and I'm glad Bella feels the same. It's be funny to watch him come back after his trip to see his brother all cozy & BFF's with Bella! Please update ASAP!!!!
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  • From caliha on March 31, 2009
    YOU!!!!!

    you totally made me late for my 9am class!! i had logged in to check my email this morning and firefox resumed from my previous session and i saw an arrow meaning you had written another chapter! of course i sat down and read over it like twice.

    (yah you're soo awesome that made my sluggish morning!)
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  • From IamIsolde on March 31, 2009
    You're such a tease. The story is really coming along and I love the long chapters. There's nothing worse than a short chapter with no substance!
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  • From Roseann1013 on March 29, 2009
    OH!!!! Yeah!
    I cant wait for JPOV!
    Edwards jealousy is written very well.
    I really like the direction of the story.
    Hope you update soon.
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