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Reviews for Destiny Awaits

By : Lollydolly
  • From insatiable06 on March 17, 2009
    thanks for your FF pen name, I'll add you!

    Good chapter, it's always harder to write in the opposite sex pov in my opinion lol.

    I did like seeing things from edwards pov, but I'd prefer Jpov later on lol
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  • From Roseann1013 on March 17, 2009
    oh!!!
    I think you did a great job writing EPOV. I like the Bella/Jasper combo...update soon there is alot of emotion in your writing. I love it!
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  • From Tourette on March 17, 2009
    Cant wait to read how Edward will react when he sees Bella and Jasper on the sofa.
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  • From IamIsolde on March 17, 2009
    I am enjoying this story..it leaves off making you want more. I also like the dynamic shared between Bella and Jasper. Always thought there was some chemistry there. This is my first review ever! You should feel special. I actually registered so I could review. I want more!!
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  • From Renee1985 on March 17, 2009
    oh i can't wait to read more Update soon please
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  • From makki on March 16, 2009
    Oh its just as lovely as the other chapters! So very lovely. You have a style well suited to the twilight series, which is quite an accomplishment. Many fanwriters don't have the ability to match it.
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  • From AceSpades on March 16, 2009
    yay another chapter. Im really liking this story. Ive never been keen on bella/jasper fics but this one is great plz update soon!
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  • From Roseann1013 on March 16, 2009
    I like this story
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  • From insatiable06 on March 16, 2009
    Same SN on FF? (mine is if your wondering, lol)

    I really love this story, it's growing on me with each chapter and I am sooo happy that I don't have to wait 2 weeks for an update! Thank you.

    I like how vulnerable Jasper is, will you give us an insight into what Jasper is thinking? Maybe a JPOV, even just a brief one.

    Becka
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  • From 27436582 on March 16, 2009
    Its a great story can't wait for more... i wonder how edward is going to react to the sight in his bedroom... can only imagine
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  • From AceSpades on March 16, 2009
    hey wow this is great please update soon i cant wait to see where this goes
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  • From makki on March 15, 2009
    i like this and hope that you continue your story. However, I don't think he'd be normal in hours. when they change, they change strongly and permanently. She might be able to change but he'd still be madly in love with her. just some constructive crit ^_^
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  • From insatiable06 on March 15, 2009
    good chapter, the only question I have is how are you going to get Edward out of the way?

    i mean most use cheating (on Edward's side 90% of the time and cheating on Bella's side 10%), then they like to kill off Edward/Alice, plus a plethora of other ways lol.
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  • From Tourette on March 15, 2009
    I like the chapter lenghts as they are.
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  • From KathrynH on March 15, 2009
    Great start, more please!
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