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By : LadyNarayamaan

From ANON - Alaina on October 06, 2011
"Bella doesn’t love me. Even if she will always have a part of me, can’t I try and give some part to this girl? She says she is broken, but I am shattered. What a pair. I can’t be fixed, but I can do for her what no one can do for me."

(*rallies the Team Jacob fan girls together to go beat the Bella bitch DOWN*)

I'll return to give you the proper 100+ word review you DESERVE.
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From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2010
this story would be alot more awesome if you updated. At this point my mind has already filled in the blanks and created my own version of the story. Its all down hill after that. please write more?
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From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2009
i dont believe it you updated! That was really good i love this story. you really should update it. I knew when New moon came out everyone would head back to fanfiction. Please keep writing!
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From ANON - Bee on November 09, 2009
Another fabulous chapter! Of course I am still here, your story is way too good to miss! :-)
This chapter was just so romantic and cute. I loved the way he asked her to be his girlfriend but I am also alittle worried about her feeling broken because that means she is going to be more sensitive to when Jacob tells her about Bella, Jacob better keep his promise in fixing her! :-)
Oh please have another yummy scene in the next chapter, because you are right, he won't see her until 7! that's an awful long time to be away from your hmm...I guess I can't say imprint or soulmate yet because I don't what they are! lol. So let's just say it's an awful long time to be away from someone your body craves. :-)
Love this story!!

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From ANON - Bee on November 03, 2009
wow. I don't know but something about a showered Jacob and Lis coming into a restaurant hand in hand seems really hot. lol. Are you going to write a chapter about the shower scene because I would love to read that. lol. Is it just me but what was with Ben? It almost seemed like he was jealous too or something but he is gay so I don't think he would be jealous of Lis and Jacob. I loved how jealous Jacob was. lol. I totally prefer Jacob over Edward any day. There is something so male about him, very masculine and I love how possessive he is of Lis. I love love this story. I can't wait to see how Lis will get when she finds out about Bella because technically she isn't still in love with her ex but if she asks Jacob how he feels about Bella, can she handle him saying that he loves her?? Oh I am very excited about the upcoming chapters!!
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From ANON - anaxibia on October 05, 2009
Why are there only 30 reviews for this story? I had given up on AFF- took me forever to find quality writing until i accidentally stumbled on this fantastic work! Im spellbound- the characterisation and descriptive language are amazing..i do hope you will continue!
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From Recordkeeper on July 27, 2009
you have to update this story!!! I need to know what happens!
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From Recordkeeper on May 31, 2009
Love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!!!! So totally hot and your writing style is very unique. I love the story so far cant wait to read more!
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From ANON - Bee on May 29, 2009
That annoying thing poking at Jacob's chest is JEALOUSY! I know you won't say whether they have imprinted but it totally feels like they have. Jacob is obviously jealous of that blonde maggot as he so graciously called him. lol. I like where you are taking this direction, it appears that Lis is going to try to stop herself from getting attached, how will Jacob react? He is possessive of her, will he allow her to put distance between them, to just make it about lust? Somehow I doubt it. I LOVE THIS STORY. Your writing is so hot and intense, I can seriously read about Lis and Jacob for hours! hahaha. So please update soon, real soon! Hugs!
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From ANON - Ultra on May 18, 2009
War mal wieder klasse! Thanks for the long Jacob POV those are always the best!
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From InfernalParadise on May 17, 2009
Back and full of Carlisle's sedatives (yummy…) – which I needed for that utterly hot excerpt of “Edward’s Thirst” – I have finally decided to take answer 5) which is: GOD DAMN IT, POST THE STORY ALREADY – EDWARD WILL ALWAYS BE MINE ANYWAY, SO DON’T GET YOUR HOPES UP!!!
In other words (for those who listen to the little, fairy-like buzzing in their minds): Thou shallst post (ABER FLOTT!!!) the oneshit… uhm, oneshot. Sorry. *lol* Today’s absolutely not my typing-day… ;)

I just adore those kinda polls! Can we get another one in the next chapter, like on the topic “who of you idiots left five reviews for my story?!?!?”
Pleeeease?? ;P
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From InfernalParadise on May 17, 2009
*must stop the fainting now as Carlisle was called into the ambulance and called me “little hysteric drama-queen“… that’s so not true! I only faked fainting like four times in Edward’s presence so far, and I always had very good reasons to do so (especially once, when he didn’t agree to see the movie I wanted to watch…)!!!*

*must remember to NOT get Carlisle anything for Christmas again, ever*

*pouts*
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From InfernalParadise on May 17, 2009
*is still out, but the medics are optimistic for her to recover rather quickly…*
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From InfernalParadise on May 17, 2009
Here comes my highly regarded and just as appreciated Poll answer (should stop listening to Muse’s “Megalomania”… the title has some really bad influence on my ego…). After having taking the “50:50 chance” (of course, the computer wouldn’t work and left me stuck with all four possibilities as before), I decided to call someone for help (unfortunately, however, my first telephone joker said “Edward who??” and the second one threatened me with heavy lawsuit if I didn’t keep my fingers off her beloved Mr. Cullen. I told her to go to hell after which she – completely surprisingly – hung up on me. Such a touchy bitch…). So what am I supposed to do?!? I can’t do this on my own, making a decision on a topic like this!

*simply faints*
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From InfernalParadise on May 17, 2009
I see you’ve joined the “let’s pet me on my head” group since lately that seems to be what most of my friends started doing. Is it my hair?? My little brain?? Sympathy for my mind’s repeated standby-modus-thingies?? My my my, we’ll never know the answer to that secret. ;P

Alright, let’s get to the PWLP (Porn with lovely porn *hehe*) part: I LOVE IT (thus the religion thing)!!! Your language is so fantastic and rich in warm images and smells that I get completely and hopelessly enamored over and over again whenever you update. The best addiction I’ve ever had. *sighs contently*
The thing is just, your smutty moments (the sexy morning scene was too yummy to describe it with words of awe…) aren’t only causing sweet oblivion to Jake and Lis, but they also make ME forget everything which turns out to be rather embarrassing when it comes to writing the review afterwards cuz I go all like, “Story? Yummy. Anything else? Huh?? Who am I, by the way?!?” Not good. Can’t stop it, though. As I said above, I’m addicted to every tiny bit of your story, your replies to my reviews and whatever else there may be.
And NO, I didn’t think this chapter was confusing. Both Jake and Lis are obviously confused (which doesn’t keep them from doing it like bunnies, though…) which I can easily relate to, but the chapter as it is was not. Please don’t change anything. It would adulterate, trust me.

No cookies to me this time, though. *sobs* I’m simply too stupid to realize “what is that annoying feeling that pokes at Jacob’s chest”. :’( Must have studied too much of Canon Law to get that. Still, it doesn’t change anything about the fact that I’m so silly… *sobs turning into wails*

Ahem. When I told you to keep your fingers off of Edward, I did NOT mean for you to encourage him to have his fingers in… ooops, I swear it’s just a typo!!! I meant ON!!! Anyway, to have his fingers on himself. On. Definitely on. Did you get it?? ON!!! *phew… wipes sweat away*
Honestly, I don’t like the bad influence you seem to have on Mr. Cullen. If I were his mother, I’d tell your mother to keep our kids from playing with each other, just so you know. Will have to talk to Esme about this since she’s the only one to play the mother figure without making it seem obscene… ;)

Edward under Jacob… mmh, if you prolong that into a little threesome, I’ll stop the shocked face this second and change it into a smirk. Hehe.

And I couldn’t help noticing reaper07’s review (especially the last line of it), which makes me wonder: Kann es sein, dass du aus Deutschland oder Österreich bist?? :)

By the way, I love your profile. ;) It made me laugh out loud when I read it. You’re too funny (“He glitters people. 'Nough said”, “Once you go Black, you never go back.”). I guess I just have to love you, too (as a worshipper loves her goddess, of course). *lol*
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