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Reviews for Storks and Wolves

By : fusedtwilight
  • From SandmansAngel on July 01, 2009
    That was so cute, and yet the story was really good. I loved how you got Leah to tell Embry what she was doing with his hair sample, and how Sam and Jake told Billy to make the meeting with the elders. I hope you update soon, because it's getting really good so far in the story.
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  • From SandmansAngel on June 27, 2009
    This was so good, and I loved how you got all of them to see the baby in the video. I also like the way you had Quil's gradfather remember his past in the story. I can't wait to see what happens next in the story, and I hope you update soon because it's getting really good so far.
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  • From VampireAldys on June 25, 2009
    The plot is beginning to thicken, and it is becoming addictingly delicious! I cannot remember all of the things in the books, but if the Makahs were not in the books, I applaude you. That is a very ingenious addition to the story without getting too predictable or feeling like it was just thrown in hap-hazardly. Keep up the good wrting. Again, I envy your story wrting skills. Once I get to a certain place, I stop, not knowing where to go. I actually have you in my profile as a suggested author! Do you think, if it isn't too much trouble, that you could look through one of my stories, The Eye of the Beholder, and see where you see things going? I would really appreciate your advice and experience. If you are not able to, I understand.

    GREAT STORY! KEEP IT UP!

    ~ Aldys Annabel Clairveux })j({
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  • From SandmansAngel on June 22, 2009
    This is getting so good, and I can't wait to see what happens next in the story. I hope Quil tells them about what Sam and his grandfather talked about, just because it's really important to know those things. Also I really like how you have Alice forseeing what would happen to Leah; it is so cute and I'm glad you have Alice telling Leah what's going to happen to her. Great job with the story so far, and I hope you update real soon.
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  • From SandmansAngel on June 21, 2009
    I'm glad that Leah is okay, and that she knows the sex of the baby is the fact that it's a girl. The way you had Sam find out about the other side of the story about the other wolf clan was really good. Also how you had Quil over hear their conversation was really well put together as well. I can't wait to see what happens next in the story, it's getting really good so far and I hope you update real soon.
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  • From ANON - NZPixie on June 20, 2009
    Wahoo - another chapter! Granted, I really shouldnt be reading it because I have a bio exam in two days, but still - somethings in life are just more important and good fanfiction is one of them!
    Every day I love Leah more and more and by the end of the story, I hope she has kicked some major ass and shown everyone who is boss.
    Lol, I love Nessie's views on 'Conception and the birth process'
    Can't wait for the next chapter (though maybe I shouldnt look for updates until after my exam lol)
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  • From ANON - Aldys on June 18, 2009
    Another WOW! And GRRR!!! You stopped right when it was getting good... a cliffhanger, if you will. MORE MORE MORE! I was hoping the... um... "interaction" between Embry and LEah would have been more detailed, but one doesn't have to do that unless they want to. Embry's reaction to it, though, was very genuine and true, I think. Keep writing!
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  • From SandmansAngel on June 13, 2009
    It was so cute at first with Embry and Leah trying to make out, until it got really ugly when Seth came into the room and saw what they did. You did a really good job with this chapter; I hope Leah is okay, it would suck if something happens to her baby and I hope Quil finds out what his grandfather and Sam are talking about. Which is why I can't wait to see what happens next in this story it's getting really good so far. Also I didn't see any spelling/grammer errors which is great, also I hope you update soon, and I wish you luck for the twilight awards thing or whatever it's called that you're going to do.
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  • From Roseann1013 on June 12, 2009
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    You cant just leave me hanging like that!!!!! update SOON!
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  • From SandmansAngel on June 10, 2009
    That was really cute how you got the Cullens and Jake's pack to play baseball with each other. It even got better how you had Embry and Leah making love to each other, and how you got him to react the way he did was priceless. I hope you update real soon because it's getting really good, and also you might need to reread it just to see if there is any spelling/grammer errors in it.
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  • From SandmansAngel on June 07, 2009
    I loved this chapter, and I can't wait to see how this turns out for Leah. I thought it was funny that you got Leah to pull out the hairs of Jake, Quil, and Embry. I hope you update soon, because this story is getting really good so far.
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  • From ANON - NZPixie on June 07, 2009
    Bwahaha, Leah pulling out clumps of their hair? Awesome! Laughed like a nut. I love this story so much - I swear I check everyday for updates. I cant wait for more - and to see what happens with Leah and Embry.
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  • From SandmansAngel on June 05, 2009
    I really loved this chapter, and it was cool how you got Leah to punch Sam. Also keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From SandmansAngel on June 02, 2009
    I love this chapter, and I'm glad that you're going to have Leah and Sam just talk it sounds like a good idea. Also I loved how you're not going to let Sam off the hook that easily; he really needs to suffor a little more. Anyway I can't wait to see what happens next in the story, and I hope you can update as soon as you can.
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  • From SandmansAngel on May 31, 2009
    I love this chapter, and the face that Sam did was priceless when Leah said that to his face. All I got to say is you go girl, and I can't wait to see what happens next in the story.
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