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Reviews for Southern comfort

By : bdayornite
  • From Abaker9 on November 02, 2021

    This is great. I love this take on Jasper's Outlook. How do I put you on alert?


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  • From Safir84 on September 18, 2010
    The two latest chapters were great and the character interaction was too, of course, everything was well written, apart from a few typos (again nothing major, mostly rather mindless, but unfortunately noticeable, I’m afraid, sorry!). Maybe you should get a beta reader to help you out a little, just a tip, that’s all! Hope you don’t take offence!

    Anyway, the smut at the end of chapter five; was very nicely described, awe, poor Jasper, what will he do?! Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon…

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  • From lileeyore76 on August 25, 2010
    Send an email of the story to tico_wannabe@yahoo.com. We'll talk more there make sure though to tell me in the label that your the author of Southern Comfort

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  • From trulygreat on August 22, 2010
    Erm . . . I see the author's note, but no chapter - and you have me hooked!
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  • From Jesterjp on August 21, 2010
    Hon, I love your story and I can't wait to see more, but you either need to reupload chapter five, the website is screwing up, or My computer is just spazzing because all I see in chapter five is your authors note. :
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  • From lileeyore76 on August 19, 2010
    *wipes tears* our southern boy finally found Alice. I love this and actually you're doing good with the grammer and if you need someone to read over this and help with grammer just holler at me. I've beta'd for others so I can help. So happy to meet someone from Texas as well.


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  • From lileeyore76 on August 16, 2010
    Wow I like this story please keep going and the typos weren't too bad. Can't wait to see more of Jasper course I'm bais being from Texas and all. :)


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  • From Safir84 on August 13, 2010
    Great story you’ve here, I quite like it, so far! The plot’s great and so is the character portrayal and character interaction, too of course and everything is well written, apart from a few typos, oh, well, nothing too much so no worries, eh!

    Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon…

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  • From lordoberon on August 11, 2010
    Please update soon! I have been getting into Jasper's character lately, and I think out of all the stories we get in Twilight of the vampires' pasts, Jasper's intrigues me the most. I love to see a fanfic finally delving into it!

    The typos are noticeable but nevertheless good writing, you keep it exciting. I can't wait to see how this turns into a Jasper/Bella fanfic! Interesting pairing...please continue!!
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  • From RoxieCullen454 on May 04, 2009
    I'm really liking how this is coming along and am glad you finally updated! I've never seen a story that goes so much into Jasper's past, so I think it's very cool! Keep up the good work, and post sooner!
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  • From Emeraldfires on April 23, 2009
    I hope you continue soon!
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  • From RoxieCullen454 on April 05, 2009
    Sounds like an interesting start, and I'm not even a fan of historical wars and such (but I am for Jasper)! Are you planning to eventually relate it to the Twilight plot, or if he'll just run into a Bella from his time. We'll see! Keep it up!
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  • From Roseann1013 on April 05, 2009
    Great start!
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