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Reviews for The Last Scion

By : RotSeele
  • From restless88 on October 13, 2010
    this story mades me cringe so bad and the amount of light you have shining out of murtagh ass is unbelievable. I still have a smile on my face reading this because everyone knows in the true final book murtagh is going to be killed lmao and it will be the best part of the whole cycle.
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  • From Sinemett on October 12, 2010
    i thoroughly enjoyed reading this chapter!! i'm so glad i checked today for an update! the battle scene was well written and i loved the insight eragon gained as he watched murtagh and his growth from it. ^_^

    eagerly awaiting more!
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  • From Sinemett on August 11, 2010
    SQUEEEE!!!! this chapter was exciting! i loved the exchange between thorn & saphira and the battle was well described. i could see it in my mind. i want more! i need to know what happens!!!
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  • From Sinemett on July 08, 2010
    SQUEEEEE!!!!!! i came back to review your previous chapter, as i didn't have time when i last read it, and i found another update!!! ^____^ i thoroughly enjoyed this last chapter! i loved murtagh's strength and determination to get his point heard, and the Trial with eragon...i really enjoyed reading it. and what a way to end the chapter! i loved that last line! i can't wait for more! ^_^
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  • From Sinemett on May 28, 2010
    ^___^ yay! i loved thorn's entrance and elva's comment!
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  • From Sinemett on May 09, 2010
    i love it when you update!!! ^_^
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  • From Sinemett on April 29, 2010
    yay!!! another chapter!!! i was so excited to see that you updated again this month! i assumed that with school it might be a once a month thing (and perhaps it is, and this is just luck ^_^) so it was very nice to check and see this chapter. still loving it! i do so love the way you write the relationship between thorn and murtagh ^_^
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  • From Sinemett on April 08, 2010
    hello!

    so i read your story in one sitting...i'm dying for you to update! i know life gets in the way, but i enjoyed reading this so much and i can't help but want more!

    i think its very well written. i wish i could comment on the characterization, but i haven't actually read the books, i've only seen the movie (which probably didn't do the books justice if its like any other book to film story). i have enjoyed the depth and development you give the characters and your descriptions of pretty much everything. i agree with nordanvinden - i love the relationship between murtagh and thorn, the plot, you write all the diverse scenes very well, i enjoy your dialogue...so many wonderful elements! its so nice to read such a great story!

    i think i may have to check out the other stories you publised on lulu - i enjoy the way you write.

    eagerly awaiting an update!

    cheers ^_^
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  • From Safir84 on December 11, 2009
    Man, I really don’t know where to start, but I’ll try my best, eh! First of all; I’m sad to see that no one else have left a review before now, oh, well their loss, right?! Secondly, I’m kind of in love with this story of yours (after reading it, that is), it’s amazing I think, everything from the plot, to the character portrayal and character interactions are pretty damn brilliant, and it’s extremely well written too, in both atmosphere, dialogs, emotional and action sequences! You’re truly talented, you know!

    Okay, so on with the review, shall we! I absolutely love your Murtagh and that this story is in his point of view, as there aren’t many of them out there, so thank you for writing it! More so, I adore his and Thorn’s relationship, it’s so sweet, cute and full of love and respect, awe, how can you not love that?! You really feel for the both of the through-out the story; some of the hardships they go through are really tragic and emotional, as well as beautiful and funny, of course, too!

    So Murtagh and Thorn are finally freed from Galbatorix’s evil clutches, sweet and both Murtagh and his dragon are being trained by Eragon, the first rider (and his dragon, in turn) and the Fel, cool! And now they’re off again, to end the war, hopefully that is!

    I wonder though, about the parings; I mean: in the summary of this fantastic story of yours, it reads; M/F, M/M and I can only assume or wish what is means, right?! Is it perhaps Thorn/Shapira and Murtagh/Eragon (his brother, half-brother), I’d love that; the latter paring is after all one of my favourites, oh well… If it’s not I won’t go under, hehe, because this story is so wonderful and whatnot, I absolutely love it!

    I sincerely hope you’ll continue writing it, because I’d love to read more, therefore please do and update soon…

    Thanks for sharing!

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