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Reviews for Prelude

By : belladonnacullen
  • From KathrynH on August 04, 2009
    Wow, Alice is so underapreciated. I loved last chapter too, dirty minded Edward is always fun. Hehe.
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  • From linnamedeiros on August 03, 2009
    OMG!!!! Ive loved this chappie ^^ XDDD it's sooo sexy without beeing vulgar xDDD and soooo roamntic , sweet.. kyaaa x))

    anyway just one tip, about the brazilian portuguese song(i'am brazilian yay ^^), the grammar is kinda wrong:
    "Quero vida sempre asim
    Com voca perto de mim
    E eu que era trista
    Descente deste mundo
    Ao encontra voca eu conheci
    O que a felicidade, meu amor"

    correcting:
    "Quero vida sempre ASSIM
    Com VOCE perto de mim
    E eu que era trista
    Descente deste mundo ..> i couldn't understand well what you wanted on this line( the right away translation would be: ***********************************"descent from this world" O_o)
    Ao ENCONTRAR VOCE eu conheci
    O que a felicidade, meu amor"..> on this line i think you wanted to have "O que é a felicidade, meu amor"


    Wonderfull job on this fic!!!! it's AMAZING the way you describe actions and thoughts ^^ i'am really looking forward to the next chappie ò_ó!!!! XDD *begging* please uptade soon >_
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  • From Sekhmet on July 29, 2009
    Awww!!! More please?! I love it!!
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  • From Firelady112 on July 28, 2009
    Phew! Is it hot in here? Please, please update soon, I can't wait for the wedding night and for the happy reunion of Alice and Jasper! This story is brilliant!
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  • From Sekhmet on July 18, 2009
    So I just started reading this and I love it!!! I also love that you used Sekhmet(or the idea of her) in this story. I actually have Sekhmet tattooed on my back in hieroglyphs...so when I read that it made me smile :D So I hope you update soon!! I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From KathrynH on July 15, 2009
    Poor Alice, no wonder she's an overamped pixie, it's all the dang stress!
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  • From KathrynH on July 13, 2009
    Kinda hard to believe this hasn't gotten more hits. I know I'm definitely enjoying it! Can't wait to read what happens in the desert. Cullens gotta kick ass!
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  • From MoonlightSparkle on July 12, 2009
    Oh my god. I have just melted! I was internally screaming for Bella to not tell him to wait! Love it! Update with and Edward and Bella chapter soon please! xxxx
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  • From MoonlightSparkle on July 09, 2009
    I love this story...the hot and steamy bits are amazing....The Arabian nights chapter nearly had me chewing my fist with the sexual tension....i loved the bit against the window especially.
    Love it, please continue! (especially the Edward/Bella Chapters!)
    xx
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  • From linnamedeiros on July 06, 2009
    come on... just say it: you are Stephanie Meyer arent ya?
    AWESOME!!! this is my second review cuz my first one apparently got lost somewhere LOL, but you fic has the best characterization i've ever read. And i read a LOT xD! I luv you story OMG OMG!! I am you FAN !!! there are fanfics out there with warm vampiric edwards.. and weird stuff like that ¬¬' , but OMG you did perfect on this fic, please keep up the WONDERFULL work!!!!!!!!

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  • From MoonlightSparkle on July 06, 2009
    I love this story so far....I think you have Edward's perspective down to a T. Ive written a story on here but am too scared to write anything from his POV, as I know i wont do it as well as you have done!
    P.s loving the steamy bits!
    XXX
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