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  • From Songoftime on September 21, 2009
    I was wondering with the wolves would show up, and that was an unexpected way to change Whitaker or at least to begin the change. Whitaker's love is amazing. I understand he's been through a lot so he's used to pain, but the amount of will power he has to ignore pain is outstanding. He's actually starting to become a role-model for me, which is weird since I didn't like him too much at the beginning of the story.
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 21, 2009
    Wow, this time you actually posted the new chapter just as I was reviewing another story. Perfect timing! ;)

    Did anyone else notice that Carlisle ALWAYS has to kinda clear up the mess his "kids" leave behind?? Poor Carlisle. :( If I were him, I'd definitely punish them, vampire or not. Hehe.

    But again, how you can you leave us with such a cliffhanger?? This chapter was EXTREMELY good, I dunno why. I guess it had just everything in it, from the wolves to the blood and changing. I've read the Prologue, so I knew this would happen sooner or later, but I wasn't prepared for it happening now. It's lovely (if that's the right word to describe it...)! :)
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  • From ANON - Kiki on September 21, 2009
    Hi I really like your story and I have been reading it from the start. Please please update soon. I think Whitaker is a great character and he and Jasper are great together. I¡¦m on the page everyday to see if there is a new chapter. I think this chapter is okay, it can¡¦t be love all the time and it¡¦s a great way to show that Whitaker is very much in love and trust Jasper but that Jasper may not be so much in control as he would like. Great chapter ƒº. But Please make Jasper come back soon.
    Keep up the good work.
    Kiki

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  • From Songoftime on September 20, 2009
    Nice twist. Did not see that one coming at all. Your writing has so many twists and turns, I can hardly keep up with it. Maybe I'm just slow. Congratulations on another great update!
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  • From elvinwitch on September 19, 2009
    Well that doesn't help with the trust issue. Can Jasper get over what he did and how long will that take? Guilt and self resentment can be powerful things. I can almost see Jasper staying away for a while and Whitaker having to convince him to come back. Interesting twist.
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  • From sking6999 on September 18, 2009
    I thoroughly enjoy this story. Update soon please
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 18, 2009
    Rough chapter, but I certainly don't hate you for it, hun! Stories are like kids... you can show and tell them what you want them to do, but in the end they'll be happy to ignore you and find their own way. ;) So far, however, I really like how it developes.

    I was a bit surprised about Whitaker going into this when Jasper was warning him to not get any closer, though. Could it be that Whitaker is Bella's secret brother?? A magnet for danger?? *lol*
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  • From Songoftime on September 17, 2009
    Wow, Whitaker is very understanding. I expected more emotion from him, but I guess after all he's been through, it makes sense. I like how the angst was lifted with a happier note at the end. Great story so far, I'm curious to see how it's going to end.
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  • From elvinwitch on September 17, 2009
    Humm, so the secret is out. He took it better than I thought he would but then love can do that to you. Wonder how the others will take it, especially Rosalie.
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 17, 2009
    "Can someone say…Necrophiliac?" and "I’d offer you something, but I’m fresh out of live venison." were my most favorite lines. They made me grin to no end. ;)

    I like how Jasper's coming-out happened. It was so calm. I was afraid Whitaker could get hysteric or something, but I'm really happy that it worked out so well. Plus, they may get on with the smut soon which is great... hehe.

    Don't worry, the panic attack from the othe chapter was just fine. Actually, I even found it rather realistic. :)
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 15, 2009
    It’s SO rude of Mr. Scary Edward and Jasper to talk like that in front of Whitaker. He must have gotten the feeling like he was channel-surfing, always missing pieces. MEN… ;)
    “Hello? The ‘he’ you’re most likely talking about is right here”. *lol*

    Well, at least it’s good for Edward to have a little “coming out” himself. I’m sure the cafeteria was already waiting impatiently for him to inform everyone about his sex life. Hehe. Oh my, I swear I had to laugh very hard a few times while reading it… it was so hilarious, with Whitaker bringing himself in every now and then. ;P
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  • From firephoenix65069 on September 13, 2009
    could you make this into a female version. i like this one but a can't really relate to much with a guy.
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  • From Songoftime on September 12, 2009
    Yay for chaos and confusion. Lots of angst in this chapter, but done well. I'm curious to see how Whitaker will take the news.
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 10, 2009
    You know, those last few lines about Edward being scary were really scary. I got goosebumps. :) Probably because I love Edward getting scary. Hehe.

    Nope, Lynn is NO lady. For all I care, Whitaker can slap her back. Afterwards, we'll just all say we didn't see anything. ;)

    Sorry, that's it. I'm too stupid to write any really smart, funny review today. O_o
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  • From wkukluver on September 08, 2009
    Love this i hope ur gonna continue soon cuz i wanna know whats gonna happen when he finds out Jasper and his family are Vampires
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