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Reviews for Moving the Moon

By : SnackAttack
  • From ANON - schritttempo on July 24, 2010
    Hey!
    I just stumbled over this story. Now I want to beg for more! LOL
    I hope you update soon, I would love to read more!
    :)
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  • From ANON - BearFace on June 25, 2010
    I WANT MORE!

    and I want it to be hooot ;)
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  • From snowboredingal123 on December 13, 2009
    So is there more? cause its awsome! keep writing im dying to knw how edwards going to react to him later on in the story!
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  • From ANON - P on December 05, 2009
    Please update this soon. I'm interested to see where this is going..how Edward reacts to now knowing he is gay etc. Please! Thank you!! P x
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  • From lordoberon on December 04, 2009
    Intriguing to see Bella's part played out by a gay guy. But why follow the book so strictly? Then we'd already know what happens.

    Do something different with it!

    And I'd love to see this become 'adult.'
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  • From ANON - anonymous_fan on October 06, 2009
    wow. rlly interested in seeing how this pans out ^_^ cant wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - mini_mei on October 05, 2009
    First of: sorry my original review was supposed to be much longer and more detailed but
    then Firefox decided to crap on me and reloaded the page and I'm sorry to say but I don't have
    the 'steam' to retype all of what was lost...

    So in short: Please continue it's great so far!
    I started to read a similar story not long ago but stopped as it was badly written
    so I was very delighted to find your story!

    Your writing is fine but you do have a few small errors: you sometimes forgot a word like 'was' or 'a'
    in a sentence, also very early on you have a small grammar mistake:
    You wrote: She’s agreed to drive me up to the airport. -> "She's" is the short form of "She is"
    I don't know if you wanted to write "She has" which would be wrong also("She had" would be the correct form in that case)
    or just leave out the "'s" and it's ok too.

    Anyway, this is a very lovely story, pleas don't let it die, there are so few good twilight slash stories out there.
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  • From ANON - uberTzar on September 13, 2009
    HOLY CRAP. PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY. I love it thus far and can't WAIT for all the possibilities! @__@;;


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  • From MiriuOniaya on August 19, 2009
    Yay! My fellow writer in the M/M section of Twilight Fiction! I was the only one here at first, which saddened me. (Though I know there are more M/M stories, just not posted in this section) And so today I was like; 'Maybe I'll see if it's still just me.' And when I did, TADA, there were two more fics! So of course, I just had to read!

    That's awful about Niles! I guessed right away what had happened when he thought about how he wasn't going to go back. I hate when parents treat their kids like that, just because they like a different gender, grr. On a different note, I like his Aunt Lisa so far! Lol, I have an Aunt Lissa.

    The minute I started reading about the truck's description, I found myself wondering; 'Is there a Jacob in this one. Does he get all jealous about Niles and Edward.' Cause that could be interesting and/or funny. This is a pretty interesting twist. I'm waiting to see how it goes. I look forward to more!

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  • From ANON - jug on August 17, 2009
    Please continue this story. Please?
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  • From WarpedMinded on August 13, 2009
    Very nice job. It is going good. Keep it up! I would love to see more soon.
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  • From on August 01, 2009
    niiice man! thank goodness theres a slash story!
    i really hope you update soon!
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