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Reviews for The House That Jacob Built

By : astartelydianna
  • From ANON - lucy-willow on January 07, 2016
    great story, erotic in places, funny in places, kinky in places. It all fits together so well.Damn I wish the actual movie had ended this way..
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  • From ANON - Kat on November 28, 2014
    More!!!
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  • From fairychick10 on December 08, 2012
    I've always been a major Jacob fan so I loved this story. I love how u did her thoughts his thoughts,
    I love how u described the love sences and gave a good storyline as well... Idk I loved it pls keep writing
    more stories
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  • From ANON - Justice on October 30, 2012
    Ok it was good story but him turning into a wolf at the end during inter corse was little odd but I see it was needed. I liked the story though
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  • From Kali1979 on November 15, 2009
    I really like this story, I am so for the bella/jacob stories. He is just so sweet to her, and when she realizes she loves him too its great. Totally love it, can't wait for more!
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  • From LadyTopaz on September 29, 2009
    You actually did a great job with 'smutty'...it was classy and yet sexy...well done :)
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 26, 2009
    I agree with what wyldetygress said, though: the drinking detail didn't fit. Neither of them would do/allow that when she's pregnant, especially for the first time. O_o
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 26, 2009
    Awww, seems like everyone's having a pup except for me. *lol* Nah, I'm more into cats anyway, thank you. ;)

    I loved the wedding chapter. I love this story anwyay. *sighs* And all that without even liking Jacob a lot. You must be a genius. ;)
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  • From wyldetygress on September 21, 2009
    I loved this entire story. Just not enough Jacob stories out there to satisfy me! One thing tho. The last chapter, with the wedding, is bothering me. You had Bella say it was good they were walking since they had both been drinking. Jacob would never have allowed her to drink alcohol while preggers with his baby. Just my opinion. LOVED IT ANYWAY! lol Keep them coming!
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  • From Court7178 on September 19, 2009
    I am really enjoying this story! Please tell me you are going to write more!
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 18, 2009
    Ashamed to say this, but isn't Jacob a cutie? *lol* You manage to make him so sweet and yet keep him in character somehow which is magic in my opinion. Just great!

    "The next chapter will contain a large graphic smutty scene", hu? Now that sounds yummy... ;)
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 17, 2009
    I just love the playful banter between Jacob and Bella. It's rather hilarious to read. :)
    You make it such a pleasure to read... I can't quite explain why, but in my opinion, it's really well written...
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 15, 2009
    Well, don't we all love Spike and his lines?? ;)

    Although no Bella/Jacob fan, I still find this story rather interesting and charming to read so far.
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