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By : astartelydianna
  • From DBZchick on January 23, 2010
    I love this story! Jasper x Bella really make an interesting couple. Go Team Jasper! Are you going to continue or is this story complete now? Such a cliffhanger!
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  • From inverclacky on December 18, 2009
    Ahhhhhhhh, you can't stop there, you just can't, it's just too cruel. :-). I am going to be keeping check on you and if you don't write more soon I'm either going to poke you with a big stick or try to bribe you with a big sticky donut. lol.

    P.s. I love Jasper. I find him so endearing and I feel that you brought that side of him out beautifully. I really do hope that you do continue this story, though I was kidding about the pointy stick. :-)
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  • From kirifox01 on December 04, 2009
    I love where you are going with your story. I am anticipating the "continuing" as Jasper put it.
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  • From DrunkOnMusic on October 30, 2009
    Team Jasper All The Way. More please
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  • From jamimi04 on October 29, 2009
    I am really enjoying your srtory please add more chapters.
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  • From KateyDid on October 20, 2009
    I am completely sucked into your story! I love the idea of Jasper and Bella being together. THANK YOU!
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  • From InfernalParadise on October 19, 2009
    "... I do intend on continuing what we just started.”?? Oh, did I already mention that I just LOVE Jasper? *lol* I really hate to say this, but in this story he's actually way cooler than Edward can ever be. *hides from Edward after admitting this* ;P
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  • From KathrynH on October 18, 2009
    Oo oo oo, this keeps getting better. Bring on the smut! lol

    Aside from that, I think it's an interesting premise; the Cullen's turning away Jasper is definitely a twist I've never seen before. And while there are a few mistakes in the grammar, it's still easy to read and understand. I look forward to reading more. =)
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  • From Safir84 on October 17, 2009
    Awesome story you've got here, I really like it! The plot's great and so is the character portrayal as well, as the character interaction, of course! I love your Jasper and I really like your Bella too! Everything is quite well written, apart from a few typos and grammar mistakes, for example; in the three first chapters you wrote "Folks" instead of "Forks", nothing too big, so never mind, I guess, but you might want to fix them, just a tip!

    Finally some romance, but I want more, laughs! Therefore please update soon...ps And don't forget about the smut?!
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  • From InfernalParadise on October 16, 2009
    It’s absolutely fine that there’s no full romance yet. I like how you describe their slow approach. I especially love the details. This story is like a mug of warm, deliciously smelling cocoa… very cosy and lovely. ;)
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  • From lileeyore76 on October 14, 2009
    I am so enjoying this story please hurry I can't wait to see what else happens to Bella and Jasper. I'm glad I found this story and joined the community its been helping me write my own fanfics.


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  • From TheBlindQueen on October 14, 2009
    Love the new post! Anxiously awaiting the next.
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  • From JastissJade on October 11, 2009
    I really like this story! It's the first BellaxJasper that I've read (are there even any more on here??) and so far, you've got me hooked. My only disappointment is that the chapters are too short. :)

    I want to read more, like, right now!

    Congrats, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From TheBlindQueen on October 11, 2009
    Loved the newest chapter! I was so glad to see this one updated!
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  • From InfernalParadise on October 10, 2009
    Now Bella/Jasper is something rare, indeed, and although I’m no big Jasper fan, I have to admit that your story just has the certain something. They are both broken and lonely, and it’s a lovely idea to start things slowly and have them providing company for each other. Really curious where this will lead to… ;)
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