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Reviews for The Necklace

By : belladonnacullen
  • From Firelady112 on March 25, 2010
    Whow. What an amazing chapter. I need MORE - you are absolutely addicting, did you know that? ;)

    Please, please update soon. And yes, I know you have personal stuff going on and I wish you all the best for that, but still... I can't wait for another update! I need to know how things continue, with Aod and Sakhmet in Volterra, with Jasper and Alice on their way home (are they even going home to Forks?), not least with Bella and Edward. Plus I'm extremely curious what exactly Rose was doing to Emmett when Jasper called. Any chance for an outtake, there? *puppy dog eyes*

    You are simply a brilliant writer, I love your story, as much as I love all your other stories. They are just as captivating and realistic as Stephenie Meyer's books are, and I think that's the highest praise I can give you.
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  • From SandmansAngel on March 09, 2010
    That was really good so far and I can't wait to see what happens next in the story.
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  • From SandmansAngel on March 03, 2010
    I love the story so far, and I hope you update soon because I would love to see what happens next in the story.
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  • From SandmansAngel on January 11, 2010
    I love this story so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next in the story. I also loved how you put the fairies and the fairy queen in here is was really good.
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  • From TheBlindQueen on October 26, 2009
    Now you've got me VERY, VERY curious! I can't wait to see how all of this impacts the story. And I imagine that Edward WOULD rouse up all sorts of fantasies and longings in any unattached vampire, or human for that matter!
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  • From InfernalParadise on October 25, 2009
    That chapter was just awesome! Ireland, fairies, magic and vampires… I would have always expected that to not work with each other, but obviously, your story just proved me wrong. ;)
    Your description of the landscape was stunning – I could see it all as if I were standing right in front of it. And now that you’ve built up such wonderful tension, I won’t leave the computer alone for a single second until you’ve posted the next chapter. *lol*

    “Was there an unmated vampire anywhere who hadn't fallen for Edward?” was a really hilarious line, by the way. ^_^
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  • From KathrynH on October 25, 2009
    Yay! I guess pixie isn't just a nickname for Alice now. As always your writing is suberb, I specially like the way you are portraying Alice. She is usually portrayed as such a 2 dimensional being, whereas (in my opinion) you've given her the depth she deserves.
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  • From SandmansAngel on October 24, 2009
    I love this story so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next. There isn't a enough Alice and Jasper stories out there, but I love this one so far. I loved how you got fairies in this story, and describing Ireland in the story that was really good. I also read your other story of "Prelude"; how you did Edward, Bella, and Emmett's perspectives in that story. It was really good and now that you did a story with just Alice and Jasper's perspective in it which makes it really good to read it. I hope you update real soon, and keep up the good work.
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  • From InfernalParadise on October 21, 2009
    “My entire body quivered like a tuning fork ringing one note true and clear.” – I have to admit that I froze in utter awe while reading this line. Your way of expressing situations (and especially emotions) is truly amazing and unique.

    The flashback was just wonderful, too (will we get the end of it as well in some chapter?). Then again, everything about this story is just wonderful! ^_^
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  • From TheBlindQueen on October 20, 2009
    The flashback was AWESOME! Loved seeing another layer to their relationship, the way it was at the beginning. I've always been fascinated with the dynamic between them. Their love story is beautiful and gets far too little attention. I'm glad to see them as the focus of this wonderful story.
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  • From lileeyore76 on October 20, 2009
    I think its interesting that you have the flashbacks. It makes it so you get how Jasper felt and what he was thinking the whole time he was with Alice. I won't worry none about the flashbacks as they add to the story in a positive way.
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  • From lileeyore76 on October 18, 2009
    I'm loving this story and can't wait for more. Its nice to see the interaction between Alice and Jasper that you don't get a lot of in the books. Please Please Please post more soon.


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  • From InfernalParadise on October 18, 2009
    Little stories have Jasper's POV in some chapters, and even fewer offer such a brilliant view into him as you do. I'm always amazed once again about your eloquence which is both very, very smart and touchingly charming. You could probably even write about mealworms and I'd still fall in love with them simply through your writing. ;)
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  • From TheBlindQueen on October 18, 2009
    You managed to convey the intimacy between these two in a lovely and natural way. And the scene where they meet for the first time was... well, perfect. As always, you leave me wanting more, but in a good way.
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  • From InfernalParadise on October 10, 2009
    It’s simply adorable and beautifully written. ^_^
    Many others before me have already said that Alice and Jasper get way too little attention as a couple in the books, but that’s the truth. I’m glad someone finally decided to put them into the very center.
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