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Reviews for Normality

By : AlphaOmegaPsi
  • From bloodravyn on November 22, 2011
    please post more soon?
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  • From ANON - rebecca on September 21, 2010
    AMAZING!!!! that's all I can say. and the book sucks. atleast the last few after the fame soaked into her head and she stole ideals from fanfiction *cough*Renesmee*cough*. keep up the good work and let me know when the book comes out. I shall readeth it.

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  • From Raisden on May 05, 2010
    I was very happily surprised to check this story again and find that there was a rewrite, which was basically a whole new chapter to read. :-)

    Yes, the way Barlie reacts in this chapter is definitely him. *sigh* Oh, Barlie.

    Still, the slash lover in me *loved* the end bit with Barlie and Ethan, even if Barlie is convinced his heart isn't in it. I hope he'll come to his senses soon enough. Great chapter! :D
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  • From Raisden on April 27, 2010
    I agree with Lizzie. I think Bella would take it well if Barlie came out. No idea how Jacob would react, though.

    I'm definitely looking forward to the next encounter between Ethan and Barlie. :)
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  • From Raisden on April 27, 2010
    Aww, Barlie fell asleep on Ethan. ^_^

    I'm really happy that things seem to be heading in a good direction for these two. I'd say I can't wait to see what happens next, but I'm behind and have one more chapter to read. ;)
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  • From Murray3303 on April 13, 2010
    I just found this story, and don't know how I could have missed it. I read the entire story, so far, in one go. It's so good! I love it. Can't wait for more!
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  • From mls1971 on April 13, 2010
    Keep up the great work!!!! I can't wait to read more of this story!!!!!!!
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  • From Raisden on April 05, 2010
    *rolls around on the floor* He kissed Ethan! They kissed! Yay!!! /fangirl moment.

    I am so happy to have read that chapter! I started smiling during the dream and smiled even wider at the end. So, please please update soon! I'm dying here!

    About the dream: I completely believed Barlie's reaction. You've already shown that his emotions tend to be intense and all consuming, so it was very plausible that a dream like that would set him off the way it did. Also, I loved the pace of the dream. It flowed so well that I could see it clearly in my mind, which was a *very* good thing. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Smooches23 on March 19, 2010
    I really like this. Keep it going!
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  • From Raisden on March 16, 2010
    Aww, they're finally starting to really get along. The scene in the restaurant is definitely my favorite part so far. I just loved seeing them both be so comfortable around each other.

    *sighs* Okay, I am bummed that there was no kissing, but I am a patient person. Anyway, it's called UST for a reason, right? ;)
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  • From Raisden on March 09, 2010
    I wonder... Is Ethan having a calming effect on Barlie? If so, I hope Barlie will realize this and not do anything to sever the budding friendship between them.

    Also, the sexual tension is killing me! Can they please kiss or something in the next chapter?

    Pretty please? ;)
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  • From Raisden on February 26, 2010
    '“I’m glad you’ll be there.”

    Something in the way he said that seemed strange to me...'

    ^Hmm... does Ethan already have a bit of a crush on Barlie? I certainly hope so. :) Hopefully, Barlie will realize it soon enough.

    Another great chapter. Update soon!
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  • From Raisden on February 01, 2010
    "But I can't help where the muse takes me."

    I definitely know what you mean. My muse is constantly going off on a tangent whenever I need to be focused on something. Will you be posting chapters of your book online or are you going to get it published? Best of luck to you, though I think it'll be quite good considering you have such a great writing style. Haha, yea my sn is a play on words, though technically 'Raisden' isn't an actual word, so I can see how it would take a while to get. ;P On to the story...

    Oh, Barlie, you insensitve boy! Obviously, Mike Newton isn't a vampire, so neither is his son! Sheesh! I'm guessing the reason Barlie seems like such a jerk is because Ethan is gay? Hopefully, Barlie will realize his mistake soon enough and make nice with Ethan. And by 'make nice', I mean... err, well this is aff.net, so I'm sure you know what I'm getting at. ;)

    Anyhoo, I love this story. I know it's only a few chapters thus far, but it's so good, and I always find myself looking forward to what comes next. I plan on being a faithful reviewer, so you'll be hearing from me again after the next chapter. So... continue!
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  • From Raisden on January 26, 2010
    Yes, this update definitely makes me happy! I'm glad you introduced Lizzie in this chapter. She certainly seems like a very interesting character, so I can't wait to see more of her. But I must say, I'm definitely intrigued by Ethan. Why would Bella invite his family over? Is he one of the Cullens? I hate suspense, so update soon! ;P
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  • From Raisden on January 21, 2010
    I must say, I am loving this story so far. I know it's only the first chapter, but I already want to know more about Barlie. By the way, I'm guessing 'Barlie' is a combination of Billy and Charlie? Very believable, as we already know it's something Bella would do. ;P Also, great writing in this story. It flowed very well and was easy to get into. I cannot wait for the next chapter, and I'm eager to know who Barlie's love interest will be. Update soon!
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