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  • From kinrowan32 on July 22, 2010
    Oh wonderful story please finish it!
    Last chapter had my. Heart pounding in. My ears....

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  • From butabara on July 14, 2010
    more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From carnalangel on July 11, 2010
    great fic. hope there's more soon. cheers!
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  • From missey801 on June 08, 2010
    omfg! i was crying my eyes out !! wow that was somthing else right there.
    hmm i think i may have made some sense of alice's vision and bella's dream. but what happens to jasper if she is a nomad with her son. nooo dont kill jazz!!! sacrafice edward instead >.>

    loving it :)
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  • From Emeraldfires on May 18, 2010
    Wow that was awesome!!!!!!!!
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  • From LylliesPlasticTears on April 23, 2010
    oh my gosh! you had me on the edge of my bed my heart racing and I was like 'OH MY GOD WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN?!" I really want to find out what happens!! please update soon! I'm having an anxiety rush!
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  • From spyderlunacy09 on April 18, 2010
    To the awesome creator of this fic:
    I would first like to encourage you and your respective muse(s) to have a moment (or several moments) of inspiration and continue to write on this marvelous story.
    Sincerely,
    ASA
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  • From abaker7805 on April 07, 2010
    Ahhh!!! Talk about a cliff hanger! God I love this story. Please please please update soon. Like now. :)
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  • From belladonnacullen on April 04, 2010
    I reviewed this really quickly the other night, but haven't been able to get it out of my mind since. So I just wanted to pop back in to point out some of the things I enjoy about this fic.

    First of all, I'm usually a Bella and Edward kind of girl, but you smoothly transition from Edward is great but stiff, to Edward is an immature, insecure condescending douche. And it's believable and largely in canon, and all together right on.

    Secondly, I can't say how many version of Isle Esme I've read, but this is the first where it's horrible and painful the first time. I was completely captivated.

    Then, there's your whole development of the idea of being bound and mated. (I've actually written about this in my fics too, some things we write are similar, some are different.) But I always thought this needed to be expanded upon in The Saga. And I like the bit about the venom.

    I loved that there was some of Peter's point of View, Writing from lesser known character POVs in the saga always expands the Twilight universe a little bit more.

    And lastly, the birth. God, thank you for the birth. It was a pleasure to read something that seemed very accurate, without vampire-bitten cesareans, discussing the afterbirth, tearing, etc.

    So, brava! I loved it, and I hope you continue!
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  • From belladonnacullen on April 03, 2010
    Just read all 17 chapters, and wow, this is great!
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  • From spyderlunacy09 on April 01, 2010
    I just wanted to take some time out of my day to thank you personally for updating this delicious tale. Please continue to update so that we can find out what happens next! Thanks!
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  • From Staceype on March 31, 2010
    Hey!

    I had to join this site just to review your story and say that I am loving it! Please continue with this story and dont give up heart. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

    Rosiegirl
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  • From VanessaWolfe on March 31, 2010
    great chapter!
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  • From CCM15820 on March 31, 2010
    nice twist in the story :) love the most recent chapter and how unexpected it was
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  • From Kayshandra on March 30, 2010
    Hey with the stopping!!! I only found this one today but I'm dying here!!! Please, more, yes?
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