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Reviews for Focused Madness

By : fusedtwilight
  • From ANON - Bee on July 29, 2010
    oh my god this is my new favorite twilight story. Seriously it's brilliant. I love that you chose Leah to write about because she is not usually a main character and I love Matthew. He is adorable and the love between him and Leah would appear to be unlikely but it is so genuine and you write it so beautifully, you can tell that Leah and Matthew have a bond that nobody can break. Like mother and child. At first I thought he might be Leah's imprint but I like the whole mother-child love twist you created. I wonder what choices are coming up? Will Leah have to pick Matthew over Sam? And I really hope you add a imprint for Leah, one that accepts Matthew as their adopted son. Oh wow, could one of the Volturi end up her imprint?!? That would be a huge twist. Maybe that's what her dad meant when he said choices will have to be made?? I am soooooo in love with this story! Please update soon, I am dying to know what happens next and I love how you wrote Leah and Matthew's love and dedication to each other, it's very endearing!!
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  • From lenabear9 on July 27, 2010
    Leah needs to whoop Sam's ass! Chapter 9 soon!
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  • From lileeyore76 on July 26, 2010
    I can't believe that its coming down to a major showdown between the packs with the elders siding with Sam. I do wonder what Carlisle's got to talk with Leah about could it be he's figuring on having to move to keep Sam's pack from killing poor Matthew. Please update soon this is as good as Pups and Tykes.
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  • From lenabear9 on July 20, 2010
    oooo very intersting. Bad Matthew, no biting!
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  • From lileeyore76 on July 19, 2010
    *gasp* oh for all thats holy. No, I don't think anyone saw that. All I can say is Sam better becareful cause well Leah won't stand for his stuff and especially when it involves her pack and Jacob. Poor Matthew I hope she gets to him and tells him not to worry it wasn't his fault. Please update soon.


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  • From tristar3149 on July 17, 2010
    uh, huh that was interesting but none the less great chapter. update soon and I will be looking forward to it.
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  • From tristar3149 on July 16, 2010
    what is it with evil cliffhangers???? love the story keep up with the excelnt work.
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  • From chloelyn on July 13, 2010
    weeeee~ updates!! Sorry for coming back late!!
    There was a family gathering,i couldn't online as much as i wanted.
    But fortunately i came back before the story went tooooooo far for me to catch up!!
    Nice updates!!
    Update quick k!!
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  • From lileeyore76 on July 12, 2010
    Poor Matthew he just found his brother not fair. *sniffles* please make the suffering come to an end quickly. I can't stand the sadness *grabs tissue dabbing eyes*
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  • From lileeyore76 on July 11, 2010
    So not fair I want to know. Poor Matthew needs someone in his life even a brother. Of course the Cullens could just adopt him and tell the Volturi to kiss their butts. LOL Can't wait for an update.


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  • From ShadowOniShinobi on July 10, 2010
    Ah! Very impressive so far. I like it a lot. can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From lileeyore76 on July 07, 2010
    Oh I love it. Its only getting better and better. Okay can't you give a girl a hint as to what Matthew's power is beside what has already been said I'm too curious.
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  • From chloelyn on July 06, 2010
    I love your story! Update soon!
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  • From lileeyore76 on July 06, 2010
    This is another good one. I can't wait to see what else happens with little Matthew and Leah
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