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Reviews for Focused Madness

By : fusedtwilight
  • From lileeyore76 on September 08, 2010
    Oh Holy Snot! Wasn't expecting him to come out of the wood work. Question not only Fred and Leah but what of Nahual too. Joham either doesn't know of him or don't want to know and we know Nahual isn't going to let Joham or his sisters have Matthew. LOL :)
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  • From lenabear9 on September 03, 2010
    haha halloween 17 soon
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  • From lileeyore76 on August 27, 2010
    This is awesome I love this story.
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  • From lenabear9 on August 23, 2010
    Oh boy! What a chapter 15 soon!
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  • From ANON - Bee on August 21, 2010
    Thanks for the shoutout! Even though I already reviewed, I just want to say that I love this story. It's perfect in every way! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From lenabear9 on August 18, 2010
    Is this chapter 12 or 13
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  • From lileeyore76 on August 17, 2010
    *Gasp* OH I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!! Can't wait for the rest of this.


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  • From lileeyore76 on August 10, 2010
    wow Love this poor Leah has a lot of drama going on and poor Matthew I think is falling in love with her. Can't wait to see who this vampire is that comes into their lives could we see a different side of Leah or will she end up having to run back to Forks? Only time will tell.


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  • From ANON - Bee on August 09, 2010
    I love this story! My favorite line:“Mommy no need a man, she is having Matthew and Matthew is loving her much.” hahaha. Matthew is adorable and it's really cute how protective he is of Leah. He really loves her. They do share a special connection and you write it beautifully. I can totally picture where they are leaving since talk about small world, I use to live in Alberta. They are really friendly in the smaller towns so you wrote that really well! I can't wait until your next chapter!!! Who is the mystery vampire and will it be a guy? oh la la. Update soon please!!!!!!
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  • From lenabear9 on August 08, 2010
    Hope it's not volturi! 12 soon!
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  • From ANON - Bee on August 05, 2010
    I love it! I didn't see that coming. I am glad that Leah is going to take care of him because honestly it wasn't matthew's fault, he just say Leah about to get hurt and he was protecting her. He didn't know that Sam was her previous love. I am so excited to read your upcoming chapters, I mean what will happen next? Where will they live? How long until Matthew has grown into an adult and when that happens, how will that change their relationship? Will she continue to be his mother? I'm so in love with this story! Thank you thank you thank you for updating and more please!
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  • From lileeyore76 on August 03, 2010
    *wipes eyes* I read it last night and again today. Poor Matthew and poor Leah. Seriously both need some help and maybe she's more attached to Matthew than she thinks. I sure hope she can do this can't wait to here what else happens for them hopefully they'll come home one day.

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  • From lenabear9 on August 03, 2010
    Sam's stupid ass deserved to get pwned. Chapter 11 soon!
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  • From ANON - Bee on July 31, 2010
    I love Fusedtwilight! Seriously that was a kick ass chapter. I loved every part of it. The singer was definitely a twist. You know I'm really not a big fan of Sam in this story. I mean he and Emily broke Leah's spirit, I mean even if it was unintentional they still did it and expect her forgiveness but they can't forgive Matthew when it wasn't really his fault? Clearly I am on team Leah/Matthew! lol. I think Sam is overestimating Leah, I really do believe she will protect Matthew with her life. And it was so sweet when Matthew was like when I get bigger I hope Leah is my imprint, man even I was hoping that she becomes his imprint! It would be the cutest thing. Like him going to Alaska and then coming back grown up, seeing Leah for again for the first time, and them imprinting?!? hahaha. Ok I am totally jumping ahead! lol. I am positive I will love whereever you decide to take this story and even if Leah's love will always be motherly, it still is really sweet. Thank you so much for updating! I can't wait to find out what happens next, I am on the edge of my freakin seat! hahaha.
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  • From lenabear9 on July 30, 2010
    nmzhgxfckjhasdgvfalhdfgcasdljhfg Chapter 10 NOW!
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