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Reviews for Cold Fire

By : Notepad
  • From Marti on August 10, 2010
    I say Bella should go for both, but in all fairness, Edward has waited 100 years to get laid, lol! BUT, if she has Jake first, followed by Edward, his iciness would sooth any discomfort from losing her virginity...decisions, decisions!!!!

    Keep up the writing and hope t see more from you soon!

    Marti

    Sorry, I've already written a review for your story but for some weirdassed reason, lately my reviews have been disappearing on this site.
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  • From ANON - Mila-Renae on August 08, 2010
    Duh, both as the same time silly. :)
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  • From Shikasgurl22 on August 08, 2010
    OOOOh! This is absolutely wonderful and eye catching. I was so disappointed when I finished chapter two and there was no three. I love it so far and can't wait to read more. I can actually picture everything in my mind and they are all in character. I wish I did twilight fics on here, but for now, I'm limited to Naruto. I think the pairing you have JacobxBellaxEdward is the best since I'm all for team Jacob, but I already know how the story ends. T-T Anyway, please update soon so that I can read more of this delicious JBE goodness!
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  • From Egoangel18 on August 07, 2010
    Oh shit!!! Ahhh Chapter 2 did not dissapoint!! I was having the worst day & you totally brightened my day with this update. Oh gawd I want Edward to be first !!! I love Jacob too tho :( Hmm maybe Jake has already lost his virginity to someone else so he won't be mad if the two virgins share that moment? Or
    maybe Edward is like "I have waited over 100 yrs for this !" haha please keep writing !
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  • From Egoangel18 on August 03, 2010
    Omg if you don't finish this story I'm going explode or something. No joke. You friggin rock. Excellent writing. Pleeeeease continue !
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  • From ANON - jackie on August 01, 2010
    this is really good! dreat idea behind it and you. are a fantastic writer.
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  • From ANON - Mopig on July 27, 2010
    Hey interesting idea, please put more :)
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  • From Katja2009 on July 25, 2010
    I would love to have more...the story as it is seems rather interesting. :) Please continue?
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  • From circe266 on July 25, 2010
    Mmmm, lucky Bella. This is what would have happened in the books, if I were in charge of the plot!

    Please, please, please write more.
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  • From lantern1984 on July 25, 2010
    More please
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  • From ANON - MilaRenae on July 25, 2010
    For the love of all things good and holy PLEASE continue this! PLEASE! Don't make me beg..... make Bella beg instead! :):)
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  • From ANON - Abbie on July 24, 2010
    I love it! I hope you do continue because I would definitely read it. Really great writing and idea here.
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  • From theladykt on July 24, 2010
    definitly more
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  • From ANON - Cora on July 24, 2010
    That is not right to leave us hanging when its starting to get good! (pouty face :( ) Please continue Please.
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  • From lileeyore76 on July 23, 2010
    very interesting could definitely be worth keeping up with. Please update would like to see where this is heading.

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