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By : fusedtwilight

From ANON - Allie on June 05, 2015
Best fanfiction I have ever read!!! Great job!!
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From oregongirl32 on February 22, 2014
I love this story a lot it is soo good im happy I can rend this very hot story on here big time
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From ANON - Azuria on January 23, 2014
Wow, what a journey! That was SO LONG! Admittedly, the lemons weren't all that satisfying compared to some of the crazy things on the site, but your plot BLEW. MY. MIND. I never imagined finding such a treasure here on this site! Every so often, I come across something truly beautiful, and when I search for it again, it's gone. It's sad, but true. I had trouble keeping up with some super-pups' names. I remember Taylor and Howie, and of course Alex. That cutie. Spencer was Sam's, which I remember mostly because of the S correlation. Leah has gone on SUCH a journey. I skipped ahead to the end, just to see what it was like. Of course, I did that a few chapters in, so I had no idea what was going on. I read to the very end and I definitely don't regret my decision- it shows how far we've come throughout the story together. Amazing. There were some warm fuzzies with the Cullens- who knew LEAH of all people would greet them with such warmth and respect? Shocking. I took notes on my favorite quotes for inspiration, which I'll share with you in a moment. Something was really sexy about Hans- not his name for sure, but something...dark? But loyal and true at the same time. You know, when he picked up Leah's first phonecall and he was super "cold" and macho? Yeaaaah. Sexy. Hehe. The last chapter was heartbreakingly sad. I can't believe you could actually write that. I mean, yes it's the course of nature but you killed all of your own characters!!! I could never do that. Maybe a couple, but not all of them.

Anyway, here it is!

"Vampires, werewolves whats next?" mom asked with a sigh.
"Faeries," Leah said.
"I swear to God if faeries are real I am done with this supernatural crap," mom said.

Look on the bright side. Poppy will surely be there, we can fight her, I said.
Bitch owes me for the cee minus she gave me on my last test, Brady said.

He kissed me, like Brady he was not a stranger to the body of a woman. But the link with the pack taught him how to properly please a woman.
In a pack that shares minds, one persons experience is everyone's experience.

st decline your offer," mom said a little coldly.
Brady took my hand in his. Giving me a pleading look.
"Please Leah, we have to make sure you are kept safe!"
"Yeah and believe it or not Sue we do actually care about protecting Leah. Not just sleeping with her so I don't appreciate your insinuation," Colin said.
Sue and Old Quil looked surprised. In what Twilight Zone did we walk into? Brady was being super sensitive and caring and Colin was being aggressive and confrontational.

I let the paper fall to the table.
This could not be happening.
They had written me love letters.

At least she is willing to keep her people from going extinct."
"Yeah, by being a psychopathic bitch! She was going to eat me!"
"She was a werewolf. They are known to do that.

"Alright, I got our day planned. After breakfast we have sex to satisfy the compulsion. Then we get a shower and go for a walk through the woods. Your scheduled run is today so I figured we could go hunt a moose together.

Think about me once in a while, and Billy, when you speak of these events make sure you tell those who listen of a brace girl who was willing to give it all up for her tribe, and please for the love of God do not omit my name.
That seems to be a trend in the stories.

"Em, I just had sex with your husband, my ex and am now carrying his child," Leah said.
"I didn't say it wasn't odd. But I know if you guys had a choice this wouldn't happen. I have been doing a lot of thinking."
"And drinking," Leah said.
I followed her gaze to a glass of wine that was almost empty.
"That too," Emily said.

Our love making had been really rough and afterwords they nearly cuddled me to death

Billy chuckled as I glared at the phone. I could see Leah giving me her 'Your a dumb ass' scowl.

God was he beautiful. It was ridiculous. I always thought Bella was insane for not dumping Edward and going for Jake. Edward was good looking, but Jake was just beyond sexy.

"Hey Leah, me and the guys have been thinking," Embry said.
"Oh God," I said.

Oh God how did this happen! I am a wolf now! Does this mean I am going to have the compulsion? I don't want the compulsion sweet mother of God!

She imprinted on Paul!
Makes sense doesn't it? He imprints on her she imprints on him.
Great now we get to have dreams about kissing Paul.

"Easier said then done. I love him more then ever but this anger I have also makes me more irritable then ever before. All the little things that irritated me about him before are stronger then before. Like how he spends so much time playing those damn sports games...or how he pees when I am trying to brush my teeth and leaves the seat up...or how he will never ever clean one FUCKING DISH!"

together we formed a great big puppy pile.

"So when are you and Rachel going to tie the knot?" Phillip asked.
"Not this again dad," Paul sighed.

"Guys...it's time," I said.
"Time for what?" Sam asked confused.
"Oh my!" Esme said covering her mouth.
Mom dropped her book and Emily and Rebecca stared at me, their mouths full of pie with crumbs falling out.
Glad to see not everyone was dense.
"My water just broke!"

"So all the men will know which baby is theirs?"
"Yes."
Saves us from doing a paternity test, I thought.

The other surged forward, happy they were no longer fighting. They jumped on their brothers, making the worlds largest dog pile.

"Mom calm down, it's us we grew up and guess what! Were wolves! Isn't that awesome"
You know what? I'm just going to go ahead and faint now and deal with this shit after the shock wares off.
Later.

"Now remember everyone, best behavior!" I said.
"Yes mom," they all said, some more sarcastically then others.

"Later today, I will be picking her up. We will do a test and see if we can change her before I have the rest come up as well. This is her first time traveling outside of Mexico. The elders never let us leave our state. But when I told them you can activate the gene the almost shit themselves."

santo joder

You think I am dumb? The only reason you are offering me this is because you are scared. You know we will stop you, so you are going to try and fuck with my head. Well you can kiss my furry ass pal.

I turned around to tell him where he could shove his deal. But he was gone.
Fucker.

I slowly began to open the lid, Jake watched curiously and Taylor was so excited he was bouncing on his feet muttering the word sword repeatedly.
We opened the lid and Jake frowned and Taylor froze.
"It's a feather," he said.
"It is the most sacred item in our tribe," I said.
"It's a feather," Taylor repeated.

"Because their fucking in wolf form you idiot!" Brandon snarled.
I felt my mouth fall open. Howie let out a small gasp and thee others all let out snorts of disgust.
Why in the holy hell would they want to have sex in wolf form?
Some people are really perverted.
"Yeah, and our dads are some of the phased ones," Nick said looking embarrassed.

She was beautiful. Yet I felt a strange desire to punch her in the face.
Odd.
"Do I know you?"

PS- there were a few pertinent typos...such as Seth fucking Leah. Quiiite disturbing, mind you!
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From ANON - Franie on November 13, 2013
Wait so is this chapter 28 or 27?
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From ANON - Franie on October 28, 2013
Out of your envisions I feel I feel marco yosef and qing are pretty spot on but your hans has a baby face in my opinion and the other two are just not quite right for me but these are your characters after all so what do I know lol I really enjoy your story soooo much and I hope you never stop lol Keep them coming! =D
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From Eclectic_Pet on October 17, 2013
And here I thought that things would settle and the pups would start finding imprints. But you are just too cruel to Leah...the girl never catches a break!?!?!?!?! I loved that Taylor has a crush on his father's imprint...that was PRICELESS!!!! I like that not all of Leah's sons are the same. Poor Howie, he should have known that his family would love him. More, Please!!!!
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From Eclectic_Pet on October 14, 2013
Man, that was a plot twist I never saw coming!! Will Leah stop phasing now so that she can pop out the last four? Will she start having 'second' sons with some of her pack? I await the answers to these and other questions. More, Please!!!
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From ANON - Angel on October 14, 2013
All I'm saying is that you made Leah a ho in this story.. I'm just saying.
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From Eclectic_Pet on October 11, 2013
Man, the nine 'little' boys growing into men...literally overnight; WOW!!! Then to also phase and become werewolves and their very own pack. That was GREAT. The fight and eventual acceptance between Howie and Alex was PRICELESS!!! I also, did LOVE Leah deciding to faint and deal with her 'grown' sons was Genius!!! More, Please!
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From Buttens on October 09, 2013
I am dying to know what happens next. If only i can figure out how to add it to currently reading :/. I will continue checking for updates, you got me hooked.

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From Eclectic_Pet on October 06, 2013
I LOVE the nine (now ten) little monsters!!! I like that they have their own little quirks and personalities. From the Alpha to the Omega. They are going to be a real hand full. My next question is...now that these ones are growing so quickly. Will each member now want a little one that will grow slowly, like a real human?!?!?!?
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From ANON - Franie on October 05, 2013
I love this fic. You have to make more chapters. I can't stop reading, , I hope you make more soon.
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From Eclectic_Pet on October 04, 2013
Why am I not surprised that something more is happening. Nothing is normal with this whole story. I thought it was appropriate that Leah made a quick den and gave birth...wolf style. Now I have to wait to see what wicked thing you have planed for Leah next!?!?!?! More, please.
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From Eclectic_Pet on October 02, 2013
You said it. Leah's has not been having luck in this story and its all your fault!! Keep up the great job!!!
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From Eclectic_Pet on October 01, 2013
Oh, what a WONDERFUL chapter. I never know when I read a new chapter what plot twist you have in-store; but I LOVE IT!!! I can't wait to see how Leah handles Hans!?!?!?!?! More, Please!!
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