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Reviews for All Grown Up: Jacob and Renesmee Part III

By : VanessaWolfe
  • From ANON - kial on December 11, 2014
    The Swan/Nate story line was obviously going to have a bad ending, I don't know if you wrote nate from personal experience, but you got teenage jerk perfectly right, When I was his age I was a little like that, and I knew people who were much worse.
    Alice's ability is quite easy to grasp, she see's the outcomes of decisions, as soon as someone decides something different, the vision changes.
    Also Alice's and Jasper's abilities aren't centered in the mind, and therefore are not blocked by Bella's shield, which you indicated in part one.
    But this story (the whole AGU storyline) is a great addition to the Twilight series, although it's not official, I don't think S.M. could right it better.
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth on September 14, 2014
    New chapter?
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  • From Juliemac40 on September 01, 2014
    Thank god you were able to posted AGU on that website... I can't wait for a update!!! I love this story. :)

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 27, 2014
    This chapter is from part one
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  • From Syndi-Dowell on August 27, 2014
    I'm not sure how to put this story or you as an author into my favs on here, but I'll do my best to keep up. :)
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