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Reviews for Breakdown

By : LRThunder
  • From ANON - Chelsea on March 04, 2005
    awesome, the whole love thing was a little extreme though... I love how he did this "intentionally"! maybe it was his brother getting tired of the fact he hadn't gotten laid...
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  • From ANON - Brenda on March 04, 2004
    oh I like, I like! I don't come to adultfanfiction.net often. The story seemed to move a bit fast, but the basic idea t was was good. could of used a few more details here and there, which would of paced it better. :) Paced or not, I still would of read, like I did. Not very many Frank/Nancy fics, especially rated R content! :)
    Brenda
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  • From ANON - SailorPoison on October 28, 2003
    Mmmmm... Nice sex scene.

    Lol love how it was " a mystery" at the end when they discovered the problem was that simple.
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  • From on June 21, 2003
    I LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTT GREAT STORY YOU HAVE AWESOME TALENT!
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  • From ANON - Josh Gellis on June 17, 2003
    That's a playful story, I've noticed however that while Nancy Drew is fanfictioned a little ol' grand masterpice of television comedy and drama is over looked, a show called (that I was barely old enough to remember) "Family Ties" has never had it's own NC-17 fan-fic seires, perhaps Mallory and Alex have an incestual interlude.
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